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.MictoriouS. 5 71.43%
WICKEDCLOWN 2 28.57%
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Old 11-26-04, 01:15 PM   #1
Wickedclown
Only the Illist
 
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From: your worst nightmare
WICKEDCLOWN vs .MictoriouS.

IP: 1AF0 6ADD

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit
No hate votes

30mins to check in
30 mins to drop a verse after check in...................

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-26-04 at 01:45 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.
 
Old 11-26-04, 01:20 PM   #2
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.MictoriouS. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-26-04 01:20 PM.
 
Old 11-26-04, 01:26 PM   #3
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Old 11-26-04, 01:35 PM   #4
Wickedclown
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haha motha fucka.... you ready for this?...check it

motha fucka step to me like he iron mike in his illist prime
lil bitch imma show you mictorious aint worth a fuckin dime
this fool trys to spit his shit ill and misses the mark like shaqs freethrows
imma show you son were hatred comes from, belive me that shit grows
deep inside when you step to me, imma spit it to ya ears drums like fire
motha fucka you think you got the skillz? damn dawg youz a lier
and you only lyin to ya damn self, we all know ya rhymes suck
nigga you bout to find out what it means to run outta luck

mictorious im splittin ya fuckin cells like mitosus in the lab
watch the fuck out son, see the ax on tha shelf? imma grab
and start swingin it straight to ya motha fuckin dome
im sendin ya home, fuck you nigga you been sonned
and now its time to send ya ass straight to hevan to meet the lord
nigga your name is gonna be the next death to be added to my murked board
yeah bitch its time for ya lyrical death and shits commin soon
when i pull my ax back and swing it fast ya meet ya doom
motha fucka no ones gonna miss you, ya dead, bloody on tha floor
standin at heavins gate and knowin u been fucked up hardcore

BIATCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 11-26-04, 01:37 PM   #5
Gotti Nuffguns
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Blah
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My rymes fully 'sarrated` to maximize 'damage~to~text' My lines pack muscle` your's cant 'manage~to~flex' /

Eat ya' 'heart whole' and leave you 'cast' like the 'dead~sea~scrolls' you 'bastard` get 'blasted' till ya 'head~piece~rolls' /

Like a 'bag' on your 'head` i'll have you 'gaspin fo' breath` call me 'moses` I'll 'part' ya 'skull' and put ah 'gap~in~yo~head' /

Ravage necks' wit 'cut throat style` as I 'cratered~his~chest`'served' this hater like a 'waiter' and 'catered~his~flesh /

'Haunt you in ya sleep' this is my 'dream~task' this dope~is~threw we got no 'hope~in~you' this kid 'prayed to god to win and he~laughed'...! /

Best be 'enlisting~in~track~dun' cuz you dont 'run~shit' you dumb~bitch i dont 'get ya punches' you should keep a 'dissing~in~captions'...! /

Im 'quick-to-CRASH-the-SCENE' lyke 'frightened~vandils', and ill 'PRESS-ya-SOLE(soul)' lyke 'TIGHTNED~SANDALZ', Im 'fightin~and~ill', so watch me 'BURN-dis-WICK' lyke i wuz 'LIGHTING~CANDLEZ' / -- K.O. -- Personal
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Old 11-26-04, 01:38 PM   #6
Gotti Nuffguns
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Uppin' ..
Uppin' ..
Uppin' ..
Uppin' ..
Uppin' ..
Uppin' ..
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Old 11-26-04, 02:08 PM   #7
atti?
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Voted For: .MictoriouS.

??? Are You Fucking Serious???...
Clown You Whole Verse Was Lacking...
Most Of Your Punches Sucked...
And The Decent Ones Were Soooooo Played...
Only Thing I Can Say You Had Better Was Structure...

Mic Or Whatever, Ya Shit Was Pretty Decent...
Some Nice Originality And Some Decent Punches And Wordplay...
You DID Have A Pretty Nice Flow...
You Need To Learn To Set It Up Better Though...
Overall This Was An Easy Win...
Vote: Mic-???...This Kid
.One.
 
Old 11-26-04, 02:14 PM   #8
Wickedclown
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for christs sake................fuckin hell... uppin this shit
 
Old 11-26-04, 02:15 PM   #9
Gotti Nuffguns
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0 - 1 ..

Uppin this bitch .. !!!! ..............
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Old 11-26-04, 04:21 PM   #10
streetryda
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Voted For: .MictoriouS.

alright mictorious got this

break down

wicked-aaight u had a good flow going on in that verse and i saw some multi's which helped it your structure was off though and you lacked vocab...i didnt really see any hard hitting punches or any good personals in your verse try makeing them more direct instead of babbling about him.....make them mean something....you coulda came harder....5/10

mic-aight you had really stretched lines and shit try to even out your structure and git rid of the / after your verse.....you came harder with punches and personals they were more direct and they landed....you had a lot of multis in your verse which is nice to see.....your vocab topped wicked's cuz you had more that he did......8/10

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Old 11-26-04, 04:38 PM   #11
Gotti Nuffguns
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2 - 0

Uppin this bitch .. !!!! .................
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Old 11-26-04, 04:40 PM   #12
blackwell
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Voted For: .MictoriouS.

punches=mic
mettas= mic
structure=wicked
perosnals=tie
wordplay=mic

wicked ya need ta make ya verse a bit more complex coz at the moment all ya doin is rhymin off one one word..ite it sounds orite in some songs, but ta elevated mcees its just wack. Learn some multie schemes n youll kick ass

n mictorious, i dunno y ya putting al dem fucked up captions in ya verses, i mean its not gunna make it sound better, just made it harder a read. Ya last punch was ill ^^, but the rest didnt do shit. I'll press ya soul like tightend sandels LMFAO ^^, keep it up man.

my vote= mictorious
 
Old 11-26-04, 05:56 PM   #13
Wickedclown
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goddamn...guess i was on an off day or somethin, i knew it wasnt my best shit but dayum! its aight tho, good battle MIC, guess ill have to come harder next time... i underestemated you and it bit me in the ass... uppin it
 
Old 11-26-04, 11:57 PM   #14
Gotti Nuffguns
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LOl ... nice battle ..

i keystyled that shit too .. but yeh .. ggood battlee
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Old 11-28-04, 04:06 AM   #15
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

Mic
decent punches
structure was gay
flow was gay too
vocab was aight
overall u had a wack drop
structure was too fuckin stretched
flow couldn't match up wit tha structure..
elevate more
kid...
1/10

[b]Wicked

punches were decent
structure was aight (don't center it not unless it is a topical battle)
flow was pretty decent
vocab was nice
overall yo drop was good..
5/10

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