Yo this a freestyle about da world today i think its hot lemme noe wat yall think iight.

Aiyyo bush a crazy nigga man i swear he really sumthin
he musta not've known im da weapon of mass destruction.
My rhymes are like osama but they harder to find,
Bush should come up to brooklyn and see us on our grind.
If u ask me Sadamm is a mutherfuckin coward,
i bet u Osama had nuttin to fuckin do, wit da TOWERS
Cop dose terrorist cards they sellin by da packs
My lyrics are deadly than Cab drivers with Anthrax.
I cant wait for George Bush to bounce from head of this nation
i bet Laura be Doming' while he gives his "little" presentation.
Cuz i kill a mutherfucker not a problem at all
i give u more problems than Paris playin wit her boyfriends balls.
But its nice to noe that Nicole Richie "got back"
but i bet 1,000 ni99as already hit datfrom da font to da back
Splat oops there goes my kids all ova her face,
ill get arrested for throwin on Tim's clean wit out da lace.
im jus wonderin how da systems all fucked up now,
a death every day but they expect everybody to smile.
Fuck bein broke im goin straight 4 da paper chase,
pussy money and life it wat puts a smile on my face.

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It Was Ok... Thought You Were Gona Flow More On World Related Topics..... Started OUt Good But I Didnt Like It Towards The End.... I Like Your Battles Better.. But Anyway...Bout Osama And Twin Towers... Opinions Are Opinions... But Either Way Tali' Did It And He In It, Or Lead It, Or Whatever I Dont Remember, But Struc Was Ok.... Some Parts I Liked Better Than Others.. Wasnt Feelin The Bust On Face Line lol But.. You Should Try To Stick More On Point With What You Start With So It Dont Fuck Up Flow And Topic You Know.. K.. Well Ok Drop.. Elavate A Lil Bit.. You Ight Tho...

Peep My Drop- Key'...

peace

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You lost it near the middle, you just started babbling. Once it hit the Paris Hilton line, it wasn't that good from there. I was hoping you would stay on the topic, but... Other than that, Structure was good, flowed properly. Multi's, meta's, wordplay. All that needed work with this drop. Keep elevating.
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yo im feelin yo shit and you true rapper emcee. peace

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it was iiaght due i give you propse for the use of words and the way you flow but it needs more real shit to it like dont same some shit and dont mean it if oyu really feal that way the reader with understand that and tell you it but idf shit is not truth full then 'iam tell you see if you mean what you say then yall find the words to flow with it you no if you need to talk about what i said email me and all hit you up man