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01-21-06, 11:18 AM | #1 | ||
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Thats My Word
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Soundclick Link:www.soundclick.com/unf Direct Link:http://www.soundclick.com/pro/view/...57&content=song Left Feed: Chief-Increasing To Be It http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220007 Trakk Starr-Miss Bow Down(Matty Mac Diss Vol.2) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220090
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01-21-06, 11:45 AM | #2 | ||||
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beat sounds like some chief shit..is tight .....constapation line was nice...chorus is good,proly shoulda dubed it a lil bit..i would try to articulate a bit more man,the unironed cloths line was nice man.....u hittin them punches up a lot now adays eh !! thas wusup man
Feed used 1/24/06 "OMB diss"
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01-21-06, 11:48 AM | #3 | ||
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Word thanks Up!!!!!
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01-21-06, 12:55 PM | #4 | ||
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the beat is kinda cool wouldn't spit on it....the flow is solid for the most part...some lines a little over stretched...the lyrics are cool some lines stood out more then others....the chorus is cool maybe if u repeated it twice it would of been better..the second verse sounds smoother then the first. this is a solid drop.
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01-21-06, 01:17 PM | #5 | ||
Nt Your Average
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thanks
chorus is done 2wice tho lol uppp
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01-21-06, 01:33 PM | #6 | ||
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oh my bad lol sounds like it's done more then twice lol
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01-21-06, 01:39 PM | #7 | ||
Nt Your Average
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Lol word....thanks for feed tho i appreciate it
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01-21-06, 01:58 PM | #8 | ||
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peeped it man, yeh i agree some nice punches there, beat was kinda weird layed out, n the lines were overstretched in a few occasions but its a nice song 7/10 Pz
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01-21-06, 02:32 PM | #9 | ||
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Thx...............................
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01-21-06, 02:58 PM | #10 | ||
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ahhhhhh i just remembered who u kinda sound like......... J-Kwon..... sorry to hurt ur feelings like that, but especially with ur old delivery..... u sound like him... like on Hood Hop..... hah
and no im not just insultin him phenom..... the dude just isnt online but to comment on the track, u got some better lines than u had on most ur tracks..... and since Phenom closed my thread for reasons unknown to me (or im guessin Phenom, i cant remember whose moddin this now) i guess u cant rtf...... Last edited by FuxJustAWord : 01-21-06 at 03:03 PM. |
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01-21-06, 04:02 PM | #11 | ||
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beat ok.........................
flows good/.......................... lyrics r nice.................... sum good punches in there......................... hook was ight...................... delieverys was coo too.................. good drop difrent that usual overall7/10 keep droppin 1
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01-22-06, 07:13 AM | #12 | ||
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Thx for th feed
lol@jkwon
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