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07-24-04, 10:58 PM | #1 | |||
Ms. Get Gully
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I daughter hOz, but in this case...(latin diss haha)
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im' sonning a butch bitch. manly ass latino kitten
Troublesome flows shown to choke n crumble a bundle of ho's only the humble should know who's prone to get thrown when fucking wit pros you ducking it tho, ya fears obviously spilled but u still receieve serious beatings Curiousity Kills this Kat dead,sure u leave blood splat n threads but thats When ya periods Leaking excuse me for speaking but this is quiet awful tho, Quick question bitch...who's that manly voice in ya Audios? i apologize yo,didnt realize you fly solo when it comes to whack limits attack bitches like you, and to mention ya pix? its sad when AFRICAN kids even diss it! Quote:
damn..cant even get a Nig to collab wit you, im laughin too hard to even be mad rude cause ya "man" see'n U undressed is only when he's slapping the keys and askin for nudes Thats nasty tho *whew*u were born a Man, but it pays to be a Woman..just look at her scarred Tits whats worse is see'n her twat that resembles a confused gorilla with crusty parched lips Trust it hurts to see ya dick riders give me props and go crazy u wont phaze me with ya Dead weight delivery as if u were given birth to still born babies its rational that you practice ya flows i get a blasmphemous laugh at this folks, cause when i attack this faggot bitch i leave holes more open than her dysfunctional nose im punchin thru posts i'll get a psychiatrist for you to cope and except this and the way niggas sleep on ya lines is like geeks thats narcaleptic! |
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07-24-04, 11:02 PM | #2 | |
Banned: Cheating
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Structure Was Off But Vocab Was Good
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07-25-04, 12:36 AM | #3 | ||
Ms. Get Gully
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sure structure was off cause i didnt put // at the end of my linez..uppin thnx for feed back more than 7 words of criticism
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07-25-04, 08:41 AM | #4 | ||
Ms. Get Gully
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Upping again for feedback
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07-25-04, 01:38 PM | #5 | ||
New to RB
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pretty nice shit....good wordplay and vocab. It coulda had a lil more structure but other than that it was good
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07-25-04, 01:52 PM | #6 | ||
Light Weight
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dat shit was decent tha structure was off but u had nice muti's and wordplay so it was pretty decent
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07-25-04, 04:47 PM | #7 | ||
Ms. Get Gully
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word thnx up
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07-25-04, 05:56 PM | #8 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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ill shit dawg...nice disses, flow was decent, wordplay and multis were sick, but like u said, work on that structure. ~1~
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07-26-04, 12:48 AM | #9 | ||
Ms. Get Gully
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true uppz
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07-26-04, 02:38 AM | #10 | ||
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eh yo u need to work on ya structure but u r killin wit the multis. i like. dont stop.
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07-26-04, 01:15 PM | #11 | ||
Ms. Get Gully
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^^^^^^
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07-26-04, 02:57 PM | #12 | ||
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It Was Iight...It Was Lacking The Main Parts Of A Verse...Besides Multies...If Latin Kitten Is As Nice As People Say She Is..Than She Will Tear That Up..
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07-26-04, 06:33 PM | #13 | |
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this "//" isn't needed for good structure that's ezboard bullshit...yea your structure was bad and your lines were a bit dragged but you had some pretty good vocab...and a decentish diss here and there
Peep my piece
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07-26-04, 07:50 PM | #14 | ||
Flyweight
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for your sake i hope you wasint dissing me...
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07-27-04, 08:52 AM | #15 | ||
Ms. Get Gully
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^if i was it would have said african diss.
Not really understanding the structure is off thing when i read half of you peoples stuff its basically the same except the fact i use more multies then some of you . someone who said my structure is off explain it to me a lil more...thanx for feed backs n i'll drop some feed backs on yall posts |
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