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04-13-05, 09:56 AM | #1 |
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Some More RV Member Diss
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=40233
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=40233 Xcell Running His Lip Like It Was The Energizer Bunny I Owned Em In Two Lines With Just My Appetizer Dummy This Bitch Gods Angel Still Yapping I Just Might Expose Em’ Treat Em’ Like Old Car Batteries Just Go And Dispose Em’ Mad Dog’s Audio Is Shit His Record? I Never Heard Of It If His Audio Was Produced By Dia I Would Of Still Murder It Out Scheme Schema Like Dream Works The Kid Still A Dreamer If Mr. Clean Rapped With Em’ This Clown Couldn’t Spit Cleaner Dj Em Sce Can’t Even Spell Let Alone Whipe His Own Ass Damn He’s Bin On Rap Verse So Long That The Kid Can’t Even Pass Man That Little Bitch Ass Will A Peer “Only My Friends Can Get Awards” The Cunt Can Barely Rap Good, Let Alone Hit Any Of Her Cords Hold Up, I’ll Fold Up Retro Buttion Like He Was A Pop Out Rug Squash The Beef ? Naw But Leave You Squashed Like A Bug Trauma You Know My Next Move So Just Be Prepared To Run His Mouth Is His Ass Coz His Audio Is Shit, His Career Is Done Da Vinci You Aint Dope, I’d Poke A Hole Into Your Little Throat How You Finna Spit Now? 16-0? Soon You Won’t Be Able To Gloat Fuck Every Crew Who Ever Took Me Of There Side, Off The Roster What You Do Comes Back On You Two Times, That There Cost Ya Stanza Popping His Mouth, But The Faggot Got Banned For Cheating Known As King Dipset? He Knew He Couldn’t Win So He Started Feeding Peaches And Cream Is A Way To Describe These Names Aka Fuck Faces Gaps And Spaces For Punches, Don’t Trip Yall Just Go And Tie Ya Laces |
04-13-05, 06:12 PM | #2 |
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04-14-05, 09:53 AM | #3 |
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Bumping This Shit Man...........
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04-14-05, 11:32 AM | #4 | ||
Aflame with emotion
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wow, i really think you need da elevate.
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04-14-05, 12:18 PM | #5 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Good shit. 7/10 for me.
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04-16-05, 01:04 AM | #6 |
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Thanks J Dot, Pyronix You A Thief
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04-16-05, 01:07 PM | #7 | ||
in your system
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IP:
meh, too basic, nothing really special in it....flow and structure were on point, but like i said, too plain, nothing stood out
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04-16-05, 02:29 PM | #8 | |
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Blah, alittle to simple for me ... lines were just basic..
Punchlines were there but they werent hitten hard.. You personals were okay, but alittle to simple to catch my attention.. structure was good , nice way to dress up your verse , and bold ppls names.. overall it was an okay drop seen you do alot better... next time try to be alittle more complex , w/ your verse...and use better wordplay, and elevate your vocab
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