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01-25-09, 06:32 PM | #1 | ||
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Week 2: Crossfire (0-0) .vs LPMNDCTE (0-0) --Ready For Votes--
IP:
Sunday Night: Battles are set up Wednesday: crossfire 1 bar Thursday: LCMNDCTE 2 bars Friday: crossfire 1 bar Sunday: Battles Close Feeding is allowed and will be optional
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01-26-09, 09:28 AM | #2 | |
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IP:
his court room antics full of lies...he's down with snitchin, for sure
for CF to plead the 'Fifth'...he'll have to take it out his lips some more you still with wifey, you know that slut you date is full of lie & sin her politics are dirty as usually....its hard to see you say good Biden
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01-26-09, 12:02 PM | #3 | |
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Me Snitch?This Kids The Definition of A Gerbil+me dirty?daz only gna get me mo girls,,tru?
Time 2 get a pad Nerd In Thiz Rapverse Ima leav ya Ass murkd,,u Lack words no1 heard u Back Ontrack Gerbil ya Words Spew,,if this were audio Id jus say close ya fukn mouth foo Politics isa clowns move,,allrdy Fukt wishn u cud duck,,N lies?Wen i Fire,,itz all bout truth |
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01-26-09, 10:54 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
dude, crossfire. that multi uages does not work out for you, you gotta shorten up your lines. and concentrate harder on your wordplay. Dont try and put so much into every punch.
LP-your bars weren't great. You had some ok attempts, but nothin came in the end. Your lines fell off, with what was original bein said in your set ups.. v/LP, only cuz his bars were readable, and not all mumbled together with forced wordplay
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01-27-09, 12:56 PM | #5 | ||
Addicted
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LP: I didn't really feel them, they were weak I understand them but wording makes it hard too.
cross: I didn't see a punch in there, your concentrating on ryhming and flow in a punchline battle league, you should try more on shorter lines with a direct punch or personal, the first line should be a set up to your second meaning they should both tie into each other in relation. and the second line is your punch thats the main line that people look at to determine a winner. Of course multis and wordplay and other effects help make it stand out to the reader, but at the end of the day the punch decides the vote. No disrespect dude vote: LP
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01-27-09, 06:18 PM | #6 | |||
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Crossfire you can tell that your not very good at texting, step your game up and learn how to struture a punch with a personal or even some decent wordplay
LP i thought your shit was pretty weak, badly projected as far as the personals' and just the overal image of what it is that you were saying, but it was better than Crossfires vote: LP
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01-28-09, 07:36 AM | #7 | |
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his court room antics full of lies...he's down with snitchin, for sure
for CF to plead the 'Fifth'...he'll have to take it out his lips some more There is no correlation here lmfao you still with wifey, you know that slut you date is full of lie & sin her politics are dirty as usually....its hard to see you say good Biden almost misused but you'll get a less than ok (girlfriend jokes... pff) Me Snitch?This Kids The Definition of A Gerbil+me dirty?daz only gna get me mo girls,,tru? Time 2 get a pad Nerd In Thiz Rapverse Ima leav ya Ass murkd,,u Lack words no1 heard u lame Back Ontrack Gerbil ya Words Spew,,if this were audio Id jus say close ya fukn mouth foo Politics isa clowns move,,allrdy Fukt wishn u cud duck,,N lies?Wen i Fire,,itz all bout truth lame v/ LPMNDCTE
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01-29-09, 02:58 PM | #8 | ||
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his court room antics full of lies...he's down with snitchin, for sure
for CF to plead the 'Fifth'...he'll have to take it out his lips some more .. so you're saying he likes to drink? not that mean or hard hitting, good wordplay, but lame wording .. you still with wifey, you know that slut you date is full of lie & sin her politics are dirty as usually....its hard to see you say good Biden ^^and now you're saying he doesn't break up with girls when they are sluts, again good wordplay but really lame wording, makes it not hit hard. vs. cossfire you suck. your shit isn't not only not fun to read but its hard to read cuz u hardly are speaking english. why type like an asshole like that, shits dumb vote- LP
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01-31-09, 08:32 AM | #9 | ||
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IP:
5-0
LP wins 1-0 Cross loses 0-1
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