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10-24-04, 12:34 AM
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There is No Need-(still needs crits!!!!)
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B.L.A.CK-'There's No Need' ...I had to find a Route,to lose agression soon... ...So pretty much my wounds is what I'm telling you... ...Let me begin...I had about.umm... 8 of my friends... ...Attempt to make life end again...be in the wind with him... ...him can be defined as the creator...God the one with no hatred... ...claimed he has no favorites...he couldn't be rasist ... ...but the bible seems quite dated...I recently had at least... ...8 police, slam me to the gate,which made me bleed a crease... ...This was just for an ispection...can u believe my blessin?... ...I was Never arrested?...but why was it even suspected?... ...I couldn't even forget it...noone believed me so I aint even. ...confess it...The Bible Says I'm being Tested...so I failed... ...I seen less misforturn then Bills read in brail...yes I am a Male... ...but I stillneed help..my Gaudian Angels been sen from Hell... ...My body Mixed an Frail...my Cries are unheared like ...A wale from whales.. Beat Plays as chorus.... ...I Try to do audio so you hear my Timely Songs... ...But soundclik won't download and my computers disowned... ...So I'm almost always ignored...rappin in the dark... ...rappin from heart...though the Text rap keeps you bored... ...people hate to read...so if you probably seeeeee...this ...its maybe be because I made you reeeeeaaad... it ...I no it probably seems like teasing...but why I'm needless... ...Has no reason...the way I question GOD I fear That I'm a heithen... ...The closest I will get to heaven is probably the Ceilin... ...I wouldn't believe it..if I got an okay by Saint Peters... ...I continue sin like been doin...I don' know my influense... ...I'm 14 and I been intemint...How did I get into it?... ...I am adventorous it was sent to me...no ones offending me... ...Its a benefit which don't come to me...at least not plety... ...its alwas a front with me...which makes me wonder Deep... ...Its takes one of me...to put a gun to sleep...because with me... there is no need... Beat plays as closer... I bold the phrases I wanted you to see most since mst eople don't really read all of what I wrote... please do not sleep on this...but please read it all... peace BLA! -B.L.A.CK
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10-24-04, 12:38 AM
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Get Cooked Hoe
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...I had to find a Route,to lose agression soon...
...So pretty much my wounds is what I'm telling you... ...Let me begin...I had about.umm... 8 of my friends... ...Attempt to make life end again...be in the wind with him... ...him can be defined as the creator...God the one with no hatred... ...claimed he has no favorites...he couldn't be rasist ... ...but the bible seems quite dated...I recently had at least... ...8 police, slam me to the gate,which made me bleed a crease... ...This was just for an ispection...can u believe my blessin?... ...I was Never arrested?...but why was it even suspected?... ...I couldn't even forget it...noone believed me so I aint even. ...confess it...The Bible Says I'm being Tested...so I failed... ...I seen less misforturn then Bills read in brail...yes I am a Male... ...but I stillneed help..my Gaudian Angels been sen from Hell... ...My body Mixed an Frail...my Cries are unheared like ...A wale from whales.. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O DAMN NICE SHIT RIGHT ON DIS PART GOOD VOCAB IMAGINARY,GOOD FLOW ...I Try to do audio so you hear my Timely Songs... ...But soundclik won't download and my computers disowned... ...So I'm almost always ignored...rappin in the dark... ...rappin from heart...though the Text rap keeps you bored... ...people hate to read...so if you probably seeeeee...this ...its maybe be because I made you reeeeeaaad... it ...I no it probably seems like teasing...but why I'm needless... ...Has no reason...the way I question GOD I fear That I'm a heithen... ...The closest I will get to heaven is probably the Ceilin... ...I wouldn't believe it..if I got an okay by Saint Peters... ...I continue sin like been doin...I don' know my influense... ...I'm 14 and I been intemint...How did I get into it?... ...I am adventorous it was sent to me...no ones offending me... ...Its a benefit which don't come to me...at least not plety... ...its alwas a front with me...which makes me wonder Deep... ...Its takes one of me...to pu a gun to sleep...because with me... there is no need... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WOW NICE VERSE FROM DA FLOOR-UP SHIT WAS SIK MAYNE NICE VOCAB NICE FLOW GOOD IMAGINARY GOOD GETTING CREATIVE WITH DEM LINES YO I GIVE DIS PIECE AN 8/10..........WORD PUT AN FEEDBACK IN MY OPEN MIC WOMEN ABUSING CHECK THAT SHIT OUT ~PEACE~
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10-24-04, 12:43 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
word that was some hot shit dawg...nice vocabulary stucture good emotion was good liked that shit dawg keep rollion like that its good..
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10-24-04, 12:47 AM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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hotness right there man .... this was probably one of your best drops yet..nice shyt
keep it up..you had nice structure good vocab .. nice feelingz and emotions...going into the drop.... and damn you had nice meta's and good wordplay... nice drop ..and hopefull i'll see you around pz.
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10-24-04, 02:37 AM
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IP:
uppin for saome crits pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaase
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10-24-04, 03:21 PM
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IP:
uppin for more crits............
so many open mics I dropped but they never get that many crits...why?
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10-24-04, 03:31 PM
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IP:
uppin yetttttttttttttttttttttttttt again
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10-24-04, 04:16 PM
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-BTR-
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IP:
ayo B.L.A nice drop. good vocab. good flow. one of the best i seen this month and i seen some dope ones. good drop man.........
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10-24-04, 04:19 PM
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Shit was original, I like the topic a lot. Structure was decent, flow was cool. I liked the word use, it was a little different. Thats what made it stick out the most. Easily one of the best i seen in a while.
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10-24-04, 04:21 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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wow...this shit really makes you think...great vocab...feeling the topic...great imaginary...everything was in place and the flow was there throughout...this is probably the best om I have seen on rv in a LONG time dawg...nice work...keep droppin like this and you'll be sure to be one of rv's top vets...9.5/10 dawg...wow...
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10-24-04, 04:24 PM
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IP:
thanks nigz
AOD is truly runnin this now.... did I studder?
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10-24-04, 06:35 PM
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IP:
uppin for some feedback yo...
I'm hungry nigga feed me....
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10-25-04, 01:16 PM
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IP:
uppinX5 gime some feed peeps
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10-25-04, 01:56 PM
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Executing these herbs
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IP:
good shit b.l.a, that was hot, good emotion, good vocab, good creativity and wordplay, i like the heithen and ceiling line, 9.5/10 keep it up
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SPul: 20,000/10,000 debt Verbal Abuse: lied about not battling me in verse 4 wins - 1 losses - 1 ko
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10-25-04, 03:30 PM
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IP:
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