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09-01-04, 07:29 PM | #1 | ||
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Influenced by 1 of my previous battle drops, Peep Dis!!!
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I be havin bad dreams, about doin bad things
No money, my momma is gone, its a sad scene And the devil's laughin, if there was such a thing You couldn't weigh my problems out, with a human triple beam I'm all fucked up, you might find me in the dumptruck With Gin in my cup,...151 I mix em' up I'm a tough act to follow, leave your chest hollw See it ain't that tough, heat that ass up with the "Rollow" Then hit the rode, explode on niggaz with open debtaz I talk a lot of shit so my click pack Berettas, ta rip back ya leather The world is cold, you could find me off that bottle at bout 12 years old I was tired of all the arguing, fussin, & fighting 10 years later I'm ballin, adjustin the mic'n Tryin to make it through these hard times tellin my problems, But Who Cares? Everybody I know got em'... I'm upstairs Stairin out the window drinkin Olde E. I know this bottle really love me I Love You too, you be helpin me through my problems, killin my fears And you understand when I breakdown, you bring out the tears And you give me the heart...but I just can't take it Shits hells fucked up, bad luck...just can't shake it Half wat to the grave, half way from birth Startin to wonder what my life is worth I THINK I'M CURSED!!!!!! (chorus)x2 I put the gun to my head, tried to shoot Think I'm better off dead, where's my kids Make sure they ain't around, tell em' I Love em' Tell em' ben down on the ground, plug ya ears What ya hear ain't nothin but a cartoon A bad dream, ya daddy he comin back soon In another form, reborn, with some great expectations, I'ma miss you too believe it Got dealt some bad punches, but I'ma roll with it Got served some bad lunches, so now I go get it Got love when I don't want it, who's teachin me hate Got hate when I don't need it, I believe in my fate Diagnosed "Manic Depressive", only learned one lesson And thats "Fuck it, Forget it, and Let it die like the rest of em" Battled with the best of em', they can't touch me Then channeled out the rest of em', you can't fuck me Might as well gohead and let me murder myself Niggaz got hate for me anyway, take it as health And if I see you at the funeral I'ma reach out for you That one up in the corner, give his ass to the coroner He just another foreiner, all in my mix Don't have the slightest idea how I'm feelin bout shit Cause I maintain my composure, never tellin my plan My brain stained with doshja, I'm tellin you man (chorus)x1 I put the gun to my head , tried to shoot Think I'm better off dead, wheres my kids Make sure they ain't around, tell em' I love em' Tell em' bend down on the ground, plug ya ears What ya hear ain't nothin but a cartoon A bad dream, ya daddy he comin back soon In another form, reborn with some great expectations I'ma miss you too believe it (my son in the backround)="Dad.........................Dad......what are you doin in there?.......How come you're not talkin to me?"x4 faded out Some more shit I wrote in Febuary when I was on some ill shit... -1-
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09-01-04, 07:30 PM | #2 | ||
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nice...
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09-01-04, 11:32 PM | #3 | |
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a yo Infallible that was real nice man good song u writin some real shit right there
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09-07-04, 06:52 PM | #4 | ||
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man..............can I get some more feedback on this shit? only 2 drops wtf is that shit??????????????????
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09-08-04, 05:42 PM | #5 | |||
mess with me get cooked
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hmmmmmmmmm nice mayne nice keep at it u elevation nice mayne nice
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09-08-04, 05:46 PM | #6 | |||
mess with me get cooked
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Undabah1 [2:44 PM]: u always post some tiny lil bullshit post
FlAvA HaZe PiMp [2:44 PM]: lol Undabah1 [2:44 PM]: like... Undabah1 [2:44 PM]: thats good keep it up FlAvA HaZe PiMp [2:44 PM]: ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok jeeze Undabah1 [2:44 PM]: aight then Undabah1 [2:44 PM]: lol FlAvA HaZe PiMp [2:44 PM]: i'll post some big den damn it ha ha ha ok dis an goooooooooooooooooooooood fuckin script right here// u elevated i have to admit// ur good whoooooo yay go nigga keep doing yo thang lol
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09-08-04, 06:04 PM | #7 | ||
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bitch ass nigga wtf kinda post is that an IM session?
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09-08-04, 06:06 PM | #8 | ||
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yo son dats sum good shit u shud put it on audio make a song from it. Peace
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09-08-04, 11:51 PM | #9 | ||
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word up thanks cuz still uppin fo some mo feedback so yall niggaz drop some aight -1-
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09-09-04, 12:05 AM | #10 | ||
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wow, nice job on this, great flow and content, kind of long tho, but you had a lot to say and it didnt bore me at all, cus it just kept getting better, your a talented writer, keep em comin
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09-14-04, 08:49 PM | #11 | ||
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can I get some moe feedback on this shit damn..................
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09-15-04, 01:01 PM | #12 | |
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I feel u, shit anyone who aint considered takin that bullet train before is a flake who aint been thru shit or seen shit in their sheltered ass life. So know that I definitely feel u on this one. For content alone I give it a 10/10.
yo heres sumpthin of mind about the subject, be warned though I wrote it in 6/8 time so thats why it seems confusing and scrambled up. but if u read it slow I think u might get it. Either way read the words (oh and the first part of the hook was something I borrowed from Jay-Z and expanded on, the part in single quotation) especially the hook. [See I heard of Blues cats sellin their soul to the Devil to get guitar skills. Well I decided to sell mine to God, I thought to myself "Hell if u can get skill like Robert Johnsons from the Devil what could I get from God?". I guess we'll see huh? Anyway 1. Fuk om stuk in nis world!, why am I here? Musta been the will of Almighty God, Who put me here Musta been His Wind catchin my soul, Hand helpin me so I Could make it thru the Dark-ness, till it was Time For me to Arise, from the Muck and the Mire, From the Shit and the Mud Evolution said I was, Weak and neva'd be strong, Wouldnt live to be old Tortured here in my soul, All the Days of my roam I looked at life-hated it, Considered Endin it All My only thought, "What if it was worse where I was goin?" Use to tell my Mom, "Play uh Song for When I'm Gone And Spread my ashes gently, On the nearest body of Water" Cuz Fuk it Death is Upon us, All might as well Jump the Gun go get it over, Wit-dealin wit Shit! Since-since I was born, In-here in this World Fuk Om stuk in nis World!, Round and Round as it twirls Eminem Said it Well, All Alone No One Else! chorus: "But 'May God Prutec my Soul, His Angel walk' wit me And may His Wind liff me, To where my Foes can't get me Till He Gives me the Strength-to make War with these To Fight Ev'ry En'my, And Wipe'em from the Face of Hist'ry In Return-I'll be His slave, till Death get me And may He make me His slave, until life leave me May God prutec my soul, His Angel walk wit me May God prutec my souuulllll!!! Last edited by Raptor : 09-16-04 at 04:47 AM. |
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