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09-25-05, 04:20 PM
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Intermental - "My Dream" (dope track)
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209553 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209515 Therse the links I fed on, top track WWW.SOUNDCLICK.COM/INTERMENTAL MY DREAM HOLLA AT DUDE
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09-25-05, 04:25 PM
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Listenin While Typing.............Good Beat- I think i tried that beat Nice Flow good lyrics nice deep track you should put ya lyrics up cause i cant hear all ya said lol...overall real nice track
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09-25-05, 04:26 PM
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OYD
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I actually didn't like the beat...but I like how you upped ur rhyme scheme early on in ur flow...nice internals there...flow was decent to good
ur delivery for this type of song was good...ur style isn't overly amped...but it isn't as ladi back as say, Biggie...u got ya own thing overall, not bad dawg 1 |
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09-25-05, 04:56 PM
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yer nice track. i wasn't feelin the beat 2much either, although you hit alot harder lyrically in this track, then a lot of your other tracks, which is gud. had a better flow aswell. 8/10
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09-25-05, 05:05 PM
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IP:
thanks yall personally I loved this beat but I apreciate the feed
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09-25-05, 06:00 PM
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WhoAreYou?
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yo wassup mayn
yeh i was feeling this song lyrically.....as Q said your style's not too laid back but not too like abrasive if you know what i mean good drop mayn ~peace~ |
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09-25-05, 06:01 PM
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IP:
Yeah Im feelin that thanks......
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09-25-05, 10:37 PM
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Light Weight
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nice nice... nice
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09-26-05, 01:56 PM
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IP:
^^^Thanks for goin in depth...but at least you listend to it
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09-26-05, 02:47 PM
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the beat you used was kinda wierd but its not bad. your hook is pretty good actually. flow is not bad the first verse it was wierd and sketchy but it pciekd up in the 2nd through out. emotion aint to bad could use a bit of work but your commin along nice man. maybe turn your vocals down a bit though. but overall nice lil track. 1
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09-26-05, 05:10 PM
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Champion
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thanks upppin..........
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09-26-05, 05:28 PM
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Under Oath
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^^^^^^^^^^^Good Shit man................................
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09-26-05, 05:34 PM
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IP:
Thanks.............
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09-27-05, 02:14 PM
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uppppin..................
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09-27-05, 04:25 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP:
beat is boring
not feeln the voice at all flow and everything is very sloppy delivery and everything needs a lot of work not a fun track to listen to lyrics not too good, but its hard to listen when its not fun to listen too naw mean 3/10
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