5-10 lines u spit first u know da rules 20 mins to spit

.........He Musta Had a Spelling error, Cuz Darrk Is Spelt D-A-R-K
..........................Without A Doubt
I could win it with this punch, You Verse Doesnt have to display
I'm battlin a 2-10 herb, almost my other record On Orginal R.Battle..
.....Flip That, Add A Loss To The Win
You Got my Record, 11-1, This Bitch Is Gunna Feel My Rattle
Hes Talkin Gangsta, Ayo My Crew Is Mobstaaarz
.......If You Did Audio, Seal Ya Lips
Seal Em AS Tight AS I Did With my Verse, includin d.n.a of SARS
I didn't need to many punches, I Got This Lunch Lady Packin Lunches

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Bro what the fuck are you on?
*Suggestion* Leave that crack alone or you'll be gone
DId u even re-read what u typed?
It sounds like shit, go get help from Vanilla Ice
Yes i was in a Crew Named Mobstarz
Have yo Pussy ass Begging fo yo Moms
u wanna come out n play?
Pack a Vest, Gat, and a going away Pray
Cause it's a Guarantee u wont be coming back
find yo Body in the woods wit shells all in yo back

LOL!!!!!! Aight on tha real both of these suck and I dont give a fuck if I do offend you, but Im gonna have to give this to DarkK for havin better structure and lyricz tha actually make half azz sense... so there it iz my vote goes to DarkK

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meta got this he had more complex stucture and seemed to hit alittle harder

go drop a vote on my battle with trajedee and ill poll

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whoa a dr vote that nigga met had no punches no struture and no metaphores at all you is blacklisted now you wont dr votes on my battles you bitch

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AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

drop an honest vote

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Damn Yall Make Me Laughbut Ima Give This To Meph
Cause Itwas The Rhythm That Fit His Content That Set Him Apart
This Was An Entertaining Battle !!

Vote Meph


Return The Fav In My Battles
Lyondreds Vs Marx
Lyondreds Vs Money

Iight 1

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Darkk Got That One He's Da Only One I Could Understand


Return The Favour Marx Vs Lyondead
Marx Vs Slugga

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Im going to give to darrk, no offense but i really didnt get your ryhme that much meta.

Drop a honest vote on mine *praying me* miX toXins vs play-toh (Or revesred)

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MixEd ToXinZ

Literally Ill
Battles

every single got votes.. herbs..........................bump

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yo,i aint free postin,or votin,but metaphor,why the fuck did u just drop a whack verse,but when u battled me,u wa sick,an i know u sick,so was u jus takin piss or summet!

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I Promise Alot...But I Deliver Alot More...

...Topicals...

What Is Life?

Dark Disguise

writers block, retard. uppin 3...........................

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OBVIOUSLY METAPHOR WON WIT EASE.
it was jus 2 gud in every department...............
beta structure/flow/punches/everything

vote-meta

RETURN AN HONEST VOTE MAN....PLZ
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136222

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