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Old 08-16-05, 07:17 AM   #1
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MW: Mad knight vs. Drama Queen

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drop verses by saturday (12:00 uk time)

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Old 08-16-05, 07:20 AM   #2
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might aswell checkin.................g'luck DQ
 
Old 08-16-05, 08:08 AM   #3
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Oh shit...you no MW, you should be HW *snif snif*

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Old 08-17-05, 08:13 AM   #4
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Never spit dope or legit,cuz every1 knows u’ll get beat just admit
Take a hint and retire cuz even yur title is tellin u something…D-Quitz-It*
Aint tryin 2 Get Charges after this cuz my raps like real life i can beat her in a fight.....
The closet she'll ever come to be famous is her pics being compared to shaun white**....
Just time after her seeing the verse,commit suicide, so sit patiently
Even this bitch can see she cant handle the MWs, said it pure blatantly…
Knocking bitches heads off but with you im just racking your brain…
Then I came out with this,so I but a bullet though ya head like Kurt Kobian …
More emotions that an opera show,no u a drama,but cunt wants you on screen…..
Why you into text? Don’t you know all bitches can do good is cook and clean….

*A play of her title D-Quitz-It = D-Quizzy
**When she posted her pics up peeps said she looked like Shaun White!!!!
 
Old 08-17-05, 10:39 AM   #5
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Got illusions from the grass but I ain't fucking with you like Ras Kass
Ain't that kinda lass, ya mind is as dark as Tha Q's dick up your ass
Why you looking so green? Jealous cuz in this battle, I’m the queen?
“Transsexuals Tonight” is the only time we’ll see you on a TV screen
Decided to quit text because ya secret is out: real name is Beverly!
Nothing left to hide behind, you tried but failed new tricks so cleverly
Sex operation was a blunder…damn, that surgeon really sonned her
Never above, just always under: you finishing first is a small wonder




First bar: lass = girl (British English); ain’t fucking with you = song by Ras Kass, his OM is called "Minds of Darkness"
Second bar: looking green = lost to Hulk in first battle
Third bar: Beverly Knight = British female R&B singer, new tricks = his alias
Last bar: previous name = Delaware, is also called “first state” and “small wonder”
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Old 08-17-05, 10:50 AM   #6
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good drop im thinking u mite beat me here!!!!!
 
Old 08-17-05, 11:08 AM   #7
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iite.. imma break it down.

mad knight:

Never spit dope or legit,cuz every1 knows u’ll get beat just admit
Take a hint and retire cuz even yur title is tellin u something…D-Quitz-It*
^^ nice opener, worded pretty good and its a decent personalAint tryin 2 Get Charges after this cuz my raps like real life i can beat her in a fight.....
The closet she'll ever come to be famous is her pics being compared to shaun white**....
^^ hmm ok i suppose, set up wasn't good though
Just time after her seeing the verse,commit suicide, so sit patiently
Even this bitch can see she cant handle the MWs, said it pure blatantly…
^^ couldav been dope.. just needs to be worded better but its ok
Knocking bitches heads off but with you im just racking your brain…
Then I came out with this,so I but a bullet though ya head like Kurt Kobian …
^^not really feeling this.. sorry manMore emotions that an opera show,no u a drama,but cunt wants you on screen…..
Why you into text? Don’t you know all bitches can do good is cook and clean….
^^ its played but it made me laugh lol

overall: i felt your that your verse was ite. wack in some parts and good in others, you lack consistancy you start off decent then it goes downhill from there... what you should work on in youre next battle is your setup line it needs to be relevent to the punch so it can hit hard. structure and flow was ite but could still use some work.

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Got illusions from the grass but I ain't fucking with you like Ras Kass
Ain't that kinda lass, ya mind is as dark as Tha Q's dick up your ass
^^ get rid off those multies lol.. they aint owrking in this bar, but the punch was pretty funny
Why you looking so green? Jealous cuz in this battle, I’m the queen?
“Transsexuals Tonight” is the only time we’ll see you on a TV screen
^^ lol ok imma give you that one
Decided to quit text because ya secret is out: real name is Beverly!
Nothing left to hide behind, you tried but failed new tricks so cleverly
^^ best bar in your verse, it was worded decent and a decent play on his usertitle
Sex operation was a blunder…damn, that surgeon really sonned her
Never above, just always under: you finishing first is a small wonder
^^not really feeling this one sorry

overall: not a bad verse you had a couple decent punches in there. the rest were either weak or didn't make sense. flow and structure were real nice, wording of your punches was ok... get rod of those multies in your verse it doesn't really work. like i said to mk work on your set up lines so it fits the punch better. other than that its not a bad verse, well done.

ok pretty close battle but imma gtive it to mad knight. i felt he was more consistant and his punches hit harder.

v/ Mad knight
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Old 08-17-05, 10:26 PM   #8
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mad knight
Never spit dope or legit,cuz every1 knows u’ll get beat just admit
Take a hint and retire cuz even yur title is tellin u something…D-Quitz-It*
good play on the user title, good punch
Aint tryin 2 Get Charges after this cuz my raps like real life i can beat her in a fight.....
The closet she'll ever come to be famous is her pics being compared to shaun white**....
not bad, but didnt hit very hard
Just time after her seeing the verse,commit suicide, so sit patiently
Even this bitch can see she cant handle the MWs, said it pure blatantly…
she did say that...and mad's provin it...
Knocking bitches heads off but with you im just racking your brain…
Then I came out with this,so I but a bullet though ya head like Kurt Kobian …
ok..........set up was better than punch
More emotions that an opera show,no u a drama,but cunt wants you on screen…..
Why you into text? Don’t you know all bitches can do good is cook and clean….
good closer...

overall- almost every punch was solid, no really bad lines....


drama queen


Got illusions from the grass but I ain't fucking with you like Ras Kass
Ain't that kinda lass, ya mind is as dark as Tha Q's dick up your ass
didnt really make sense, i sorta get what u was tryin to do, but it didnt work
Why you looking so green? Jealous cuz in this battle, I’m the queen?
“Transsexuals Tonight” is the only time we’ll see you on a TV screen
ur a transsexual is rather played...u could have used a better name for the TV show
Decided to quit text because ya secret is out: real name is Beverly!
Nothing left to hide behind, you tried but failed new tricks so cleverly
one of the battle's better punches, good personals in both lines
Sex operation was a blunder…damn, that surgeon really sonned her
Never above, just always under: you finishing first is a small wonder
u've just made three of your four punches about mad knight being a woman, transsexual, or something other than a man....if it wasnt already played, u just played it out

[b]overall- good punch with the beverly knight/new tricks personal.......the verse was really repetitive which is what ruinde it....if u'd taken out even one of those ur not a man punches u might have won...


overall battle- i would say that mad knight wins this for bein more consistent, but DQ did repeat the same punch 3 times, which would give her better consistency, lol
good drops, V/MAD KNIGHT
 
Old 08-17-05, 01:27 PM   #9
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uppin...............................
 
Old 08-17-05, 08:02 PM   #10
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Never spit dope or legit,cuz every1 knows u’ll get beat just admit
Take a hint and retire cuz even yur title is tellin u something…D-Quitz-It*
^^^
LOL good creativity im feelin this line.....

Aint tryin 2 Get Charges after this cuz my raps like real life i can beat her in a fight.....
The closet she'll ever come to be famous is her pics being compared to shaun white**....
^^^^
Oh shit this was hot, liked the style here, yo mad aint seen u battle like this

Just time after her seeing the verse,commit suicide, so sit patiently
Even this bitch can see she cant handle the MWs, said it pure blatantly…
^^^
Yeah good line, but youre not put on the MWs...but ok line

Knocking bitches heads off but with you im just racking your brain…
Then I came out with this,so I but a bullet though ya head like Kurt Kobian …
^^^
Decent punch, this is very solid

More emotions that an opera show,no u a drama,but cunt wants you on screen…..
Why you into text? Don’t you know all bitches can do good is cook and clean….
^^^
dayum mad lol......that the killer....good stuff very solid..

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Got illusions from the grass but I ain't fucking with you like Ras Kass
Ain't that kinda lass, ya mind is as dark as Tha Q's dick up your ass
^^^
Aint that kinda lass...u even knw what that means...but still it didnt make sense lol but the rest was ok

Why you looking so green? Jealous cuz in this battle, I’m the queen?
“Transsexuals Tonight” is the only time we’ll see you on a TV screen
^^^
TRANNY JOKES...this is a first lol....but this is childish I think....sorry

Decided to quit text because ya secret is out: real name is Beverly!
Nothing left to hide behind, you tried but failed new tricks so cleverly
^^^
Ok better, much better...decent punch and personal

Sex operation was a blunder…damn, that surgeon really sonned her
Never above, just always under: you finishing first is a small wonder
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NO...sorry but NO...not feelin this...decent attempt.....keep workin at it.....one luv

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Old 08-18-05, 12:02 AM   #11
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Never spit dope or legit,cuz every1 knows u’ll get beat just admit
Take a hint and retire cuz even yur title is tellin u something…D-Quitz-It*
weak...the attempted play on her name was wack cuz D-Quitz It don't even sound like D-Quizzy......so NO!!
Aint tryin 2 Get Charges after this cuz my raps like real life i can beat her in a fight.....
The closet she'll ever come to be famous is her pics being compared to shaun white**....
played concept, if you're gonna diss the pics then come original kid.
Just time after her seeing the verse,commit suicide, so sit patiently
Even this bitch can see she cant handle the MWs, said it pure blatantly…
a punch I guess......but you know its still borderline self-glorification.
Knocking bitches heads off but with you im just racking your brain…
Then I came out with this,so I but a bullet though ya head like Kurt Kobian …
seen kurt kobain lines before, and every time they are the same boring shit.
More emotions that an opera show,no u a drama,but cunt wants you on screen…..
Why you into text? Don’t you know all bitches can do good is cook and clean….
the only bar of your verse that was kinda funny.


Got illusions from the grass but I ain't fucking with you like Ras Kass
Ain't that kinda lass, ya mind is as dark as Tha Q's dick up your ass
wack!! homo lines are played, but homo lines with Tha Q in are even more.
Why you looking so green? Jealous cuz in this battle, I’m the queen?
“Transsexuals Tonight” is the only time we’ll see you on a TV screen
GAY!! transsexual lines....hhmmm, nah cuz you didn't use it well at all.
Decided to quit text because ya secret is out: real name is Beverly!
Nothing left to hide behind, you tried but failed new tricks so cleverly
weak, cuz his name aint beverly.....so that was just fuckin stupid.
Sex operation was a blunder…damn, that surgeon really sonned her
Never above, just always under: you finishing first is a small wonder
ok, unless he had a sex operation then this bar was just gay and stupid to.


sorry to be harsh, but both those verses were pure ass........and EC you should've known first off not to put DQ in the MW section cuz she dont even do text. Mad Knight just fits in here but still the verse was gay, too much basic shit and played concepts, but MK had one bar that was mildly entertaining so he wins.

V/ - Mad Knight
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Old 08-18-05, 09:45 AM   #12
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mad knight:

Never spit dope or legit,cuz every1 knows u’ll get beat just admit
Take a hint and retire cuz even yur title is tellin u something…D-Quitz-It*

Ok opener

after this cuz my raps like real life i can beat her in a fight.....
The closet she'll ever come to be famous is her pics being compared to shaun white**....

meh

Just time after her seeing the verse,commit suicide, so sit patiently
Even this bitch can see she cant handle the MWs, said it pure blatantly…

Igh

Knocking bitches heads off but with you im just racking your brain…
Then I came out with this,so I but a bullet though ya head like Kurt Kobian …

Wack
More emotions that an opera show,no u a drama,but cunt wants you on screen…..
Why you into text? Don’t you know all bitches can do good is cook and clean….

Got a laugh out of me nice closer


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Got illusions from the grass but I ain't fucking with you like Ras Kass
Ain't that kinda lass, ya mind is as dark as Tha Q's dick up your ass

Lol

Why you looking so green? Jealous cuz in this battle, I’m the queen?
“Transsexuals Tonight” is the only time we’ll see you on a TV screen

WACK

Decided to quit text because ya secret is out: real name is Beverly!
Nothing left to hide behind, you tried but failed new tricks so cleverly

Ight

Sex operation was a blunder…damn, that surgeon really sonned her
Never above, just always under: you finishing first is a small wonder

Ok


Vote - Mad - he had the only punch that properly connected i felt
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Old 08-18-05, 10:28 AM   #13
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Never spit dope or legit,cuz every1 knows u’ll get beat just admit
Take a hint and retire cuz even yur title is tellin u something…D-Quitz-It*

^^i thought that was an ok opener, even though technically it didn't make sense

Aint tryin 2 Get Charges after this cuz my raps like real life i can beat her in a fight.....
The closet she'll ever come to be famous is her pics being compared to shaun white**....

^^I thought that bar's punchline was kinda funny

Just time after her seeing the verse,commit suicide, so sit patiently
Even this bitch can see she cant handle the MWs, said it pure blatantly…

^^decent personal, but she left herself open to that one though

Knocking bitches heads off but with you im just racking your brain…
Then I came out with this,so I but a bullet though ya head like Kurt Kobian …

^^terrible bar there was too much random S in that so i wasn't feelin it

More emotions that an opera show,no u a drama,but cunt wants you on screen…..
Why you into text? Don’t you know all bitches can do good is cook and clean….

^^decent closer but just remember a woman gave birth to you, before you use lines like that to hastily

DQ

Got illusions from the grass but I ain't fucking with you like Ras Kass
Ain't that kinda lass, ya mind is as dark as Tha Q's dick up your ass

^^ewww lol nice opener

Why you looking so green? Jealous cuz in this battle, I’m the queen?
“Transsexuals Tonight” is the only time we’ll see you on a TV screen

^^"Transexuals Tonight?" really DQ.......how old are you?

Decided to quit text because ya secret is out: real name is Beverly!
Nothing left to hide behind, you tried but failed new tricks so cleverly

^^haha didn't know they knew bout beverly knight in the US....nice

Sex operation was a blunder…damn, that surgeon really sonned her
Never above, just always under: you finishing first is a small wonder

^^nothin special really


I thought MK had this one cos daymn i saw some immature bars in DQ's verse so that lost her plenty ratings IMO

so no hate but

V/ MK
 
 


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