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Old 01-02-06, 10:13 PM   #1
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Flow Intelligent 1-0 vs Daubs 1-0 vs The Revelation 1-0

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Old 01-02-06, 11:43 PM   #2
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GL Daubs

Ill take the storylead

"I have to go back to jail... why?"

Can throw alot of true life emotion into this one

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Old 01-04-06, 07:11 PM   #3
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Old 01-06-06, 07:15 PM   #4
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This Topic Is Related To My Real Life Problems So It Was The Best One For Me To Choose


Im Going Back To Jail .... Why?


A month after release, Doing nothing but rapping to beats
I've had a rough decade just for strapping some heat
Parole hounding me to get a job, Easier said than done
All this stress quickly suffocating my chest and lungs
Plus my rent is due in a week, Only got lint in my jeans
So i gotta make it the dirty way, By hitting the streets
Catch a couple of licks, Just enough to get my head straight
Without hustling, My life would be compared to dead weight
I knew i should have stopped doing it, But i couldnt help it
Was it possible to make money legally? Am i this selfish?
But one day my life changed, I didnt think i'd hear it ever again
The same knock that landed me in prison for a seven to ten
The voice came louder than the pounding, "We know youre home"
As a sense of uneasiness and paraylsis straddled my bones
I clambered from the sofa, Not exactly sure of what to do
As the voice bellowed again, "I wouldnt run if i was you"

Sure i would be a goner if i bolted, I cracked the door open
And within a few seconds, I fell to the ground choking
"Put your hands on your head, Dont make a dumb move"
So i sat there motionless, As my home they ran through
The Feds tore my shit apart, All i worked for in every way
And it didnt matter what they found, I was done anyway
A violation of parole, Plus they found every ounce i had
My familys disowned me, I was already denounced as dad
Another man had tooken over, Now im known as a stranger
And back to prison i go, Right into the drone of danger
The interrogation room was dark and damp, slighty putrid
As the Feds shoved me around, Asking why i would do it
But i had no answer, There was an eerie silence in my mind
As i realized this was 3 strikes, no more free chances this time
With nothing to say or do, I sat there with tears in my eyes
With only one question left unanswered i just wondered why?
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Old 01-07-06, 12:39 AM   #5
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good piece i vote for you........... lol
you should come to cs
you atticus king solo mentalz = pretty good topical roster
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Old 01-07-06, 12:40 AM   #6
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and fathom this herpe monster.
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Old 01-07-06, 12:45 AM   #7
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lol
oh
and mystic hes pretty cool
and that new kid suspicious from rb
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Old 01-07-06, 05:09 AM   #8
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Vote// Flow Intelligent
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Old 01-07-06, 01:02 PM   #9
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Ill think about it
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Old 01-08-06, 02:49 AM   #10
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I vote for Flow Intelligent.....
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.....to come to CS and shit.


Oh...uhm, yeah....he wins this battle to I guess.
Although I have to say, Daubs' verse was off the chain, what a use of complex vocabs for some powerful emotion and imagery.....DAMN!!
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Old 01-08-06, 05:13 AM   #11
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People not showing is gay init flow.
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Old 01-08-06, 06:36 AM   #12
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^ You are too funny.
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Old 01-08-06, 12:17 PM   #13
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Yea it is Daubs :-\
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Old 01-08-06, 12:19 PM   #14
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Well i aint out so its aight, and i wrote and posted for that battle vs you where you didnt turn up -_-
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Old 01-08-06, 02:58 PM   #15
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Battle is closed my nikkas. Daubs is 1-1.
 
 


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