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01-03-06, 01:28 PM | #1 | ||
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The beginning
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218669
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218655 Ite...thought i'd post it up....my second song in the game, Ite holla.....want some critique to improve so go craaaaaaaaaazy. I will RTF. Song called ''The Beginning'' www.soundclick.com/kamze |
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01-03-06, 01:32 PM | #2 | ||
P.S.A**DYNASTY
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beats ight...............listnin....................qual itys prett bad yer voice is really low
and flow is off in places lyrics souind nice from what i can hear of em deleivery is kinda lackin hook is nice like tha lyrics im new at audio also so werd keep droppin youll elevate rtf on my new track feat unf called fukk a herb
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01-03-06, 01:45 PM | #3 | ||
Nt Your Average
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IP:
Hmm Used this Beat lol
Qualitys better tahn before but its stll bad flows koo delivery needs uppin lyrics are nice emotion needs workin on get confident on the mic Wow@hooks quality compaerd to other lol 2nd verse flows worse... same as first verse exept flow.... Hook its dope use hooks quality in verses homie overall:5/10 work on ur delviery quality n emotion homie Pz 1
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01-05-06, 05:14 AM | #4 | ||
Light Weight
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IP:
Uppinnnnn will RTF people c'mon y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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