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08-18-06, 03:21 PM | #1 | ||
Put Yo Money On Me
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Shake Somethin'- M-Eazy ft. Dj Cfc
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2821600
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233597 M-Eazy on tha first and second verse as well as the hook Dj Cfc on tha last verse 4 year old nephew on tha outro This is just a rough draft, sat. I'm hooking up wit a dude whose guna make this an original beat and we gon run wit it... But, I might switch up my lyrics and put this one on tha mixtape, either way...whats good wit some feed.. First track posted on RV...I do hell of em tho... Holla back! Click Myspace Link in Sig Should be able to hear, if not I'll post SC. If it takes too long to load, click out and click back on link.. *valid links*
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08-20-06, 03:25 PM | #2 | |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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sounds like you saying shay somethin in some parts
lyrics fit the track nothing spectacular flow on the first verse is pretty good a few parts it was off on the second verse you went quiet in one part lyrics im likin em a little better on this verse but flow wasnt as good as the first verse 3rd verse rhyme scheme is pretty weak in the beggining flow was pretty good but not great only thing i really liked about your verse was the adlibs overall track was pretty good flow wise lyrics fit the track well both voices blended well no doubt best part of the song was the adlibs lol
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08-24-06, 03:05 AM | #3 | |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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bump,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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08-26-06, 11:59 PM | #4 | ||
Put Yo Money On Me
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yea...GL'n on tha feed.....
bump bump like b2k no homo!!
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