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01-13-06, 05:45 PM
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Reflections
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brought to you by Red Bull and Drakel....enjoy
Reflections Impulsive scenes displayed with only truth to be told Beholding images for solely human eyes to unfold To discover the gold found hid within the Earth's den Raised to decipher between all of the stones and the gems To reveal what's pure and embrace the direction of verity Reflections show how to endure life in total prosperity But the clarity goes unnoticed, discarded to rarity And it's barely seen, leaving us hidden from charity Fuck, it's scary what you'll find beyond the fog and the smoke Looking past and through all the wealthly lies, and the jokes You'll notice different folk, the addicts, the broke Mortals lost without hope, living life trying to cope Lives full of hate, and truth, souls old and used Once loved and cared for, once beat and bruised Imagine life in their shoes, don't block it out of your mind Keep your eyes peeled, it's terrifying what you'll find You'll finally discover mankind is falling behind We can't face it, so we just run off and hide But the reflections don't lie, they carry the truth So what will youth think when they see the reflection of you? reflections are amazing, thoughts cross and convey expressions of tension, mazes of questions, and plays for affection bottled agression, corked with friendly trends and obsessions neglected lessons of figures left guessing at direction every oppression, grinds their own subjective impressions rewind your life line just to see some collective progression a hollow vessel, sailing depraved and solemn through seas of doubt crusading for knowlegde, ailing for what lifes really about clairvoyant voyages; torrent storms create vicious currents distractions attract the eye easily as waves of pictures flourish thats what the curse is; there's no compass writing through verses but ignore the thunder and lighting, using the truth to nourish worship who-ever for guidance, lost in uncharted surroundings where darkness hides the only bridge to the boundary beyond a horizon of pure composure; truth the only passage roses have no thorns; imagine all entirety as placid forever lasting, extracted through abstract ambitions listen to that inner-voice; magic attatches fact and fiction corrupted visions imprision free will, but see, hell can't keep it captured a fission erupts a rapture; leaving all other reflections shattered a tattered image stands, tranced, before the last of mirrors behold the soul pure; time is short untill the glass obscures once more.... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2615954 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2615954 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2615954 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2615981
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01-13-06, 06:04 PM
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Hope you enjoy it..
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01-13-06, 07:10 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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red i didnt read ur part im too lazy lol
drakel like the multis good flow id liek to see you and mentalz collab vocab was good not overdone like alot of rv topical heads do so props
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01-13-06, 07:18 PM
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The Topical Juggernaut
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willa do you push the keys to type with the heel of your foot, your nose, nipple slap them? Because you're fucking typing pisses me off and makes me want to bash your face in.
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Crhyme Sindicate  The unexamined life is not worth living.
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01-13-06, 07:21 PM
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I have a lot to learn...
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To check the flow, I flowed those verses to a beat. 1st verse, flow is nice.. real consistent. Fell off once or twice. 2nd verse, started out dope with the flow.. then the change ups got kind of choppy in the middle. But yeah.. flow was pretty good for both.
The lyrics were nice I reckon. Shit got the message accross real well... nice vocab.. nothing seemed forced or anything. dope. what else do i need to talk about?.... err.. fuck structure. I think thats about it. but yo, good stuff. id give it like.. 8 or 9 outta 10.
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01-13-06, 08:19 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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ok since ur all fam and shit now ill leave u feed too red bull
ok flow was god i actually flowed tat to a beat liked ur vocab u came perfect there weerd dope piece cs owns uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppp
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01-14-06, 01:13 AM
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Word.
We're fuckin' ill. |
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01-14-06, 04:13 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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and mentalz ur a stupid fucking whore stfu but i still luv u
ohh uppppppppppppppppppppp
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01-14-06, 01:49 PM
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Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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Nice drop fam dope shit.
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01-14-06, 08:56 PM
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Leave some real feed.
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01-14-06, 09:07 PM
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Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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lol alright i liked both of ur verses and how it kep on track on topic and shit and meta's and everything nice work on it all I liked everything.
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01-15-06, 06:32 PM
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IP:
Appreciate some feed. I'll leave return the favour and leave feed on your pieces as well.
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01-15-06, 06:40 PM
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IP:
word this was a really good drop i was feeling it you both had nice emotions and good feeling...both had nice wordplay and vocab i felt both had very creative points of view..and i was really feeling how both verses flowed together..overall really good drop maybe this can be in the Hof of january.
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01-15-06, 07:06 PM
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IP:
Great piece man, your multies and vocab was real nice and complex. You were short and to the point, and the way you worded everything was original. You style i not much unique, but it tops a lot of other pieces i've read from other topical/poetry heads here. I enjoy reading your pieces a lot, PM me for a collab. Great read.
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01-15-06, 07:43 PM
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^ Word, Red Bull + Drakel = Dopeness yo..
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