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12-20-03, 04:05 PM | #1 | ||
Eddy.
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[- Betrayed by Illusions, Ft Fgee,Twizzle&Potent -]
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Fgee:
The false hope of dreams cast shadows in my head Elusive silhouettes tantalise my mind before playing dead The darkness shed or has it just evolved into another form? Magicians tricks born to fool my perception and scorn A swarm of dreams shattered by a hideous realms pawn In this battle I've drawn reality drifts into holographic visions I can touch them but indecision lets it slip into a prison A dulled prism of optimism where the bars keeping me arent real But the pain I feel trapped behind these mental columns of steel I keep them concealed behind a smiling face grimacing in confusion Trying to escape fears trying to loose em But when that needle nestles in my skin…I'm betrayed by illusions Edicius: Strength, love.. power.. failure.. The circulation of spinning confusin far from amusing, it took me down.. after u hooked me on to this illusion. By setting up this.., betrayal abusing my believe &.. trust, i told u ill always hold u, my love is real not based on lust. Power of survival was injected but the flower on arrival died cuz it was reflected as in a mirror of being rejected,&yes i cried but fragile devotion controlled& a unstable emotion ground shakin no fakin love, but yet weak to grow to its final stage,and start's breaking.. Potent: I know Only Hold, Resolved from these Be-Trayed Illusions This Fony Home, Honed and made Me Stay In Confusions Evade in the Fusions Of my False Reality This Sureal Reality gives a Pulse to Amity Close to Calamity, But I learned you can find Joy When Betrayed Illusions Ploy I Craved Intrusion, of The Truth I wandered whats Her Excuse? For me being raised Like This I know you don't Smite Kids, So you shouldn't of gave me fake hope I now stutter, Just so to create Po-Par Yet I don't believe in the Pope, A Hoax Was evoked, From Foreign Folks The lyes now Cooled the Loft He was a Fan-Atic, Eratic Twizzle Stix: I see peace amongst men...Animals not en-dangered Alternatives to pollutants...global warmings a stranger Away in a manger...kids can sleep in peace w/ no worrys Perverts,paedo's murderer's are all just memories buried People married in union...forever is this pure love's token Because the new world is beautifull...Hearts never broken Outspoken by no-one all have a voice...Equality is followed And there's no-poverty of struggle...nothing need Borrowed This perfect world i see...painfully ruptured in dellusion... because every morning i re-awake...To be betrayed by illusion... Illusions can break u ..or make u ..its up to u ..
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12-20-03, 04:11 PM | #2 | ||
Eddy.
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IP:
Replyed to:
Skitten Deva Lyrical Killer
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12-20-03, 04:23 PM | #3 | |
wanna play doctor????????
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this was nice... every1 came well
i gotta say fgee deffinately had the best verse... shit was nice... all had good imagry... hit it well i really liked potent's change up in there... i was feelin that.... all of the em' actually... |
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12-20-03, 04:38 PM | #4 | ||
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illness man this was really really good nice flow, vocab etc.
Order of quality in verses: Fgee Edicius Twizzle Stix Potent Fgee The false hope of dreams cast shadows in my head Elusive silhouettes tantalise my mind before playing dead The darkness shed or has it just evolved into another form? Magicians tricks born to fool my perception and scorn ^ very nice Edicius Power of survival was injected but the flower on arrival died cuz it was reflected as in a mirror of being rejected,&yes i cried but fragile devotion controlled& a unstable emotion ground shakin no fakin love, but yet weak to grow to its final stage,and start's breaking.. ^ illness Twizzle Stix I see peace amongst men...Animals not en-dangered Alternatives to pollutants...global warmings a stranger Away in a manger...kids can sleep in peace w/ no worrys Perverts,paedo's murderer's are all just memories buried ^ off the hook Potent Evade in the Fusions Of my False Reality This Sureal Reality gives a Pulse to Amity Close to Calamity, But I learned you can find Joy When Betrayed Illusions Ploy I Craved Intrusion, of The Truth I wandered whats Her Excuse? ^ very nice All came well and I'd go as far as sayin this could be in legends |
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12-20-03, 05:02 PM | #5 | ||
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Thanx for the feedback my lovelys...
But there is no need to say who's was better and what not Enjoy the piece as a whole... (only says this because i wasnt the best...lol j/p) Pz. |
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12-20-03, 05:04 PM | #6 | ||
Eddy.
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IP:
^lol
I want to give props to all peeps in this, good verses hoe's = )
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12-20-03, 09:32 PM | #7 | ||
one wink
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It was good.
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12-20-03, 10:47 PM | #8 | |
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word
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word i was feeling it, Yall all came hard on it, nice collaberation, yall should do more aight
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12-21-03, 11:11 AM | #9 | ||
Eddy.
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IP:
Up^
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12-21-03, 11:56 AM | #10 | ||
one wink
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You all have a sort of...newish vide. Try not to stay with the topic so much. When you learn to stray from the path, while still beating it, is when you have mastered it.
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12-21-03, 02:19 PM | #11 | |
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lick my lollipop
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12-21-03, 02:29 PM | #12 | ||
Eddy.
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^Lmao he a chinese = )
''Go left if u want to go right'' ^Up
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12-22-03, 07:00 PM | #13 | |
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upper...
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12-22-03, 07:31 PM | #14 | ||
^ Says It All ^
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Wonka Runnin This Collab..
It Was Good, I Feel Fgee's Verse Was Strongest Out Of All 4...All Of Which Were Good By The Way...But Fgeeeeee's Stood Out More.. Ya'll Used Good Vocab And Stayed On Topic Well...Overall Pretty Faultless.. Very Nice Collab Kids.. If You Have Time, Check Out "Distorted Mind"..
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12-23-03, 07:24 AM | #15 | ||
Eddy.
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^Swallow my cum = ) ..hoe = )
Thnx .. Up^
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