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YoungAllstar 5 100.00%
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Old 12-22-03, 05:20 PM   #1
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YoungAllstar -VS- .:FreemaN:.

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  • 5-10 Barz
  • No Hata/DickRydin Votes
  • Due Within An Hour Of Ur Check In

This My Check In
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Old 12-22-03, 05:38 PM   #2
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aight, only jus seen this........only jus got ur PM.....

sorry

ima key my verse up now.....

good luck.....

laterz
 
Old 12-22-03, 05:39 PM   #3
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checkin in................................................ ....
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Old 12-22-03, 05:55 PM   #4
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u best spit.........................

im gona spit now................

ur comin up to ur 1 hour limit that you set..... whereas ive been busy.....
and still keyed mine up in bout 15-20 mins...........whilst doin other things!!

spit asap man....

good luck.........
 
Old 12-22-03, 05:56 PM   #5
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aight, im doin 10 lines, so u can drop 10 aswell.........................

more than that and people get bored......

here it comes................................
 
Old 12-22-03, 05:57 PM   #6
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now you've got to be just plain stupid, cuz u accepted --
ur verse will be so wack, the mods will have you rejected --
you want an hour so you can think of summin worthwile to write --
there aint no point in tryin dawg, my verse is gona be tight --
and how the hell are you gona come up with 5, let alone 10 bars --
ur punches will have me laughin, where as mine'll have u seein stars --
in a way im glad we are battlin, because my wins can then go up to number six --
then u can take this merking and show ur friends while comparin the size of ur dicks --
but really what can you expect from sum1 hu goes by the name of 'YoungAllStar' --
the only way u make a 'sik' sound is if u hurlin on the backseat of a car --
 
Old 12-22-03, 06:34 PM   #7
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where the fuk r u man!?!?!?!?

fukin make me drop then u run off........

pussy............................................. ........
 
Old 12-22-03, 06:35 PM   #8
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yo can some1 plz help me how do i pm a mod!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?! i need help cuz the dude i was supposed to battle did drop his flow in time and idk what to do?!
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Old 12-22-03, 08:04 PM   #9
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Elevate Pleaze.. Ur Not Worthy Competition... Let Me Sho U Something... LMAO

Like [i]*Midgets At A Bar B Que,*
The Steaks-R-To-High, Like I Wuz *Destoryin Books* I'm *Breakin-Ya-Spine*... Put An Ache-In-Ya-Mind, Like I Wuz *Chokin Mother Goose,* I'm Shakin-Ya-Rhymez
You Being Undefeated Is Just-A-Jinx, Take A *Gat To A Puzzle* But Still Couldn't *Bust-A-Piece*... Get *Swept Off The Floor* Like I Dust-Ya-Feet, Lyrical *Saddam* To Take Over *Nations* And Now You Can't Trust-Ya-Peeps
I'm A *Criminal* U Can Say I'm *Ruthless-Wit-Gore*, Freeman, U Ain't Get *Money For Ya Thoughtz* Ur *Useless-N-Poor*... After Dis Battle U Should Visit A *Dentist* Cuz You'll B *Toothless-N-Sore* And Da Way My Text Smackz U Wit *Tiles* U Can Say I'm *Abusive-To-Floors*
Young'll Park-"Thugz" And I Also Part-Slutz, Cuz Freeman's *Gateway Used* Not Dope He's Just A *Start Drug*... I'll Have ya Harmed-Cuzz, Doing Damage To My Name Is Like *Scratchi Diamonds Wit Fist,* Its Hard To *Mark Us*
Silence Freeman, I'm To Hot-Ta-Listen, Like *Fruity Weed From Bad Soil,* I'll Leave Free To *Rot-In-High-Positions*... I Got-Ya-Eye-Missin, X'd Ya Middle Cuz 1Like *Multiplication Problemz* Freemans Not-In-My-Division
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Old 12-22-03, 08:09 PM   #10
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yougn allstar murdered him with that wordplay........... thats tight...... 4 real......


punches bettter...
not on flow but... everythihng else was better....

youngallstar-vote
 
Old 12-22-03, 08:21 PM   #11
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opener: young
closer: tie
punches: young
strucutre: freeman
vocab: tie
wordplay: young
overall: young

young fix ya structure, an freeman jus step up ya game.

no hate



PLZ DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS, AS I HAVE TAKEN THE TIME TO VOTE ON THIS BATTLES
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Old 12-22-03, 09:54 PM   #12
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LMAO.. Uppin

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Old 12-22-03, 10:04 PM   #13
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no offence young, but your rhymes have the structure of my obese aunty and what's with all the text decorations? :\
 
Old 12-22-03, 10:18 PM   #14
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They're Not Decorations.. They Make Certain Points Stand Out... So Fuk U And Ur Aunt.. Vote Or Bounce

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Old 12-23-03, 06:06 AM   #15
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Re: YoungAllstar -VS- .:FreemaN:.

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Quote:
Originally posted by YoungAllstar
  • 5-10 Barz
  • No Hata/DickRydin Votes
  • Due Within An Hour Of Ur Check In

This My Check In



then you drop 3 hours later........

took me 20 minutes to key mine whilst doin other things....

u take 3 hours!

where u bit that shit from man?

uppin #1
 
 


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