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fuck this up
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Now i will give you a flavor that will change your behavior/
you will be beggin down to your knees for a savior/ i should give you a sex disease when i come through while i fuck you/ And go do that to everyone then continue/ i dont wanna see your sorry ass face cause its a disgrace to everyone in any place/ you better not consider fightin back cause youll just suffer/ I will have you all mixed and fucked like a shuffler/ you remind me of a fake ass from the early 90's/ when some bitches made rap look like a joke and was dying/ you wanna take control of that and fuck everything up when it comes through to kill the industry/ You do that then every rappers ass will be history/ i should fuck you up faster than when michael jackson did while kobe was givin the white girl pussy action/ over a chair you were singin ill be there up and down like an elavator then get stuck/ thats when you just fucked all this up/ no reason for lies no reason for this shit ass things to take over/ Faster than ray rays 311 career compared to the other/ your like the source of course cause you cant rap/ you cant stunt or take control because you too weak to handle/ ill burn you up 2hot like a candle/ ill rape your moms and yo moms moms mom/ blow them up like bombs over baghdad/ its like alqaeda came to her and showed them some osama/ while yo mama was bein done i was there peain and havin some fun/ i terrorize you verbally physically and mentally while i fuck your memory/ grab your money steal and hide/ took yo ass through you in the fire and died/ hope you just had a great ride/
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feed back please
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scot free
dropz aragorn
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Yo that was strate son. Do how you do it and it's done how you did it. Bless the mic!
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yey ^ there that was a nice freestyle touch up your structure and your gonna be a good freestyler on this site
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thanks uppin fo mo
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Hey man that was an aiight drop. It flowed so-so. If ya want ta get better though, ya have to add some multies. Just concentrate on one subject and let the pen go to work.
I give this piece a rating of 5/10, which is still a good rating. Also, add some vicious wordplay to this piece.... |
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That was good. The flow was nice, you need a few more multis to give it a lil more flavor. But overall i was impressed with this. Stay focused and keep it real. 8-10
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i liked it. thought the flow was dope and lyrics was aiight. keep it up
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some nice lines..flow was spot on, only thing i'd develop is vocab..sometimes by making the way you word things more complex, you can bring a whole new light to your freestylin...and throw in some more multis...makes it gel...
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pretty sweet, agree with the vocab thing, sometimes it was a bit predictable, try and liven it up.some surprises.still quite fresh.
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Was pretty cool. I always like to read keystyle, it's better than readin a song. Comes out more interesting. This was. Especially the oart about Micheal Jackson. He he
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i really like it. think it is very good
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