This Is My Try Out For Topical Leaugue


Alright ,


A White Christmas Is Something I Long For And I Enjoy/
Im Attracted To It More Than Mikeal Jackon Is To Lil Boys/
Its Such A Wonderful Sight , White And Oh So Very Bright/
Very Much Like The Northern Lights And Big Stars At Night/
Whiter Then White Paint And Very Clean Unused Napkins/
I Hate Getting Soakers But I Still Love When This Happens/
Living In the Right Place You See 1 Every 10 Years,Maybe/
Unless You Lived In Cold Antartica Since You were A Baby/
I Love To Witness It , Its So Excuisit ,I Just Have To Stare/
Its Like RapBattles Being Shut Down For Repair , Its Rare/


Peace

leave yo 3 peepo, ok but short and i dont care about christmas!!!!

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

Here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...615#post1016615

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...616#post1016616

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...618#post1016618

My Bad ....

Up
Up
Up

And Away

dont u wont suceed in topic your shit has no feelin

^^^stfu noob!!!

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Ghost-Writers

Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

Basic, simplistic still i did not dislike readin this.
Regardless if i agree with you or not,
You did get ur message across..clearly.
The Micheal line is obviously played out..Though..
I probably didnt have to point this out to you.
As for the overall picture, it was ok..to short..

Ehhh. This is a tryout. Take is seriously. Give them yo best shit. I predicted you didn't spend more than an hour on this, try spending two or three, you will have a great audition.

This was an ok Peace...
There was no real vocab, or multis...
seemed like a novice writer....work on it patna