2 Lines.

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Checkin in for the win.

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Checkin in because Token told me to I will drop by late wednesday, sorry got a lot to do.

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Ghost-Writers

Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

The only way Token ever got recognition was to play tricks on these vets dicks,
Now he has an assorment of noobs to do these favors to him, look at Tha Remix

-Had to edit to get rid of the explanation, to herbish

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

Beat Me? Now your going overboard with sarcasm, kid
You're like an item on ebay the way you've been for-bid

lmao.. blah.. I just woke up.. But atleast I didn't no-show..

Thanks for letting me spit.

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alwitey, wets get these vwotes

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

blah, everyother battles clsoed, now close this

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

Sarcasm... I'd like to vote on
this battle but your link doesn't
work. So I can't understand
your punch. Fix your link so I
can compare punches.

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I don't think there was suppose to be a link in there

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Tha Remix underlined wasn't a link?

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it was supposed to show who token was in a convo i had (Tha Remix), fuck it im not dealing with it. this is says it good enough.

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

if nobody knows what your
personal means its gonna
hurt you. Oh well... tough battle

Positives
Sarcasm - used a personal.
Personals win battles. They usually
hurt more than anything.

Token - showed potential
with wordplay. Wordplay
can, if used effectively boost
a verse astronomically.

Negatives
Sarcasm - dont exactly know
what ur personal meant but
still carried some punch.

Token - u didnt attack your
opponent specifically. I could've
been in this battle and you
coulda used that punch. It
wouldn't make any difference.
In a 2 line battle you HAVE to
attack your opponent. This
lost it for you.

Now I hope that's fair. That's the best breakdown
you're ever gonna see for a 2 bar battle.

vote - sarcasm

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^ Actually it's a 1 bar battles.. 2 lines..

But mine was personal.. Note: Sarcasm..

1-0

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lol appreciate the 4 paragraph breakdown- it is the best we'll get, now uppin for more, votes

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

that doesn't make it a personal.
A personal disses a specific trait
about your opponent or what they
did. Just because you dissed doesnt
make it a personal.
and
a breakdown consists of both verses
a bar from each thus = 2 bar battle
with 1 bar verses.

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