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Bio*Chemist
Katz.Frost
Lyrical Jesus



Walking home from school when food was thrown at me
Four kids in a fuckn' car who don't even know me
A milkshake sprayed all over my fuckn' knew shoes
Cleaning it up, while they is paying their laughing dues
I put up my hoodie hiding from the bad bully hoodlums
Crying in my sweater, feeling like a piece a fuckn' scum (Awww)
Didn't know the finger back then, so I stuck up my thumb
put it in my mouth and sucked until I sucked myself dumb
I'm fucking afraid of the female chum I've fuckn' become
I am a female, but I feel like a fuckn' crumb (your not that small)
Tried to eat lunch one fuckn' afternoon in the lunchroom
but my bucktooth beaver friend was giving me doom
She threw a bowl a soup at me and I told her to resume
Wanna hide in a costume, like I'm in the fuckn' womb
Not protected like that, mother can't take care of me
It's the Devil's Wish for him to influence me as an emcee

what you was trying to sya was ok...but iot came across in a pretty simplistic was....add more complexity to ya work....bring more to it....but as it is ok for the story the rest lacked....pz...keep at it

bad spelling...but ya know what i mean...lol

yeah complexity lacked, elevating is in order.........keep ya spit. An dawg if ya feel that way bout sh*t like dat, u need to tell sum1...............aigh Pa'EACE imout

please return the favour....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102059

..too simplistic..your flow and wordplay was below average..

Ill keep workn' on it, and don't talk lyrics so serious. peace

yeah dawg give feedback to my sh*t now........
aight.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102059

that was good i was feelin that

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