-Rules-
No DR Votes
No Hate Votes
No Crew Votes
No Free Posting
No Feeding off verse
10-16 Lines
Due Tommorow

If I dont spit first for some un-known reason, just go ahead. I wont no show or pull any shit, so dont worry bout that hommie.

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Im the new age, the revolution, or call me skillz evolution
You might know battles, but to enter one is your ' Execution '
5-0 leaves me I-Rate, your dick-rides from noobs Vibrates
Your lacking in the game, while im elevating at a High-Rate
A new Gift, so get- rapped and sent off to me too get capped
You lost already, I had your life-line cut in Elevated-Bitch-Slapped
Fuck by the feet, I take ya whole body, and continuo to re-peat
This win... My Key Treat... I dont see heat
Im the " Mountain " you cant climb, for potential im too " Steep "...

Now Time To Get Serious

My Mind is Diverse, while Se-Quales leave yours Feeble
Im known as lethal, " Your a Bitch "...
Dont get mad hommie, Im just speaking for the people...
So go Suicidle, Cause this Win and I are about to go Bridle
' Flywieght '... Im Higher in the Class, your way under my ' Title '?
Pussy of America... Your libel... No questions this clown won that election
Professions stray far, But I never knew Bitches get so much effection...
~1~



( FlyWieight is under his hole title... get it )

Thats my verse, hope everyone understood some of the word-play. I hope you guys like my rhyme scheme, its a new type im trying... G/L hommie, be sure not to feed off my verse...

My edit was to take out the explination

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What the fuck, I think he is ganna no show... You better not pul this shit if you think you might loose. Your elite, now act like it and put down your verse. It doesnt take 24 hours to write 16....

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This clown is ganna no-show because my verse is ganna win?
What the fuck, were the hell is this clown at? I Pm'd him and everything... He needs to be DQ'd and I get the win if he no-shows. I got proof he knows about this shit...

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Oh Man Do You Read Your Own Fucking Rules Dude

^Fucking Sad When You Wack Kids Who Cant Even Spell Tomorrow Correctly Bitch, Its 10:30 My Time, You Said That Quote Yesterday, So My Verse Is Due In The Next Hour And A Half, And No Your Shit Was WACK Your About To Be Fucking Blasted Kid

Swaying Votes, You Hopped On X Ecutions Dick From The Start
How The Fuck You High Class When You Failed Your Report Card
Wheres This Fag Been? I'll Take A Break And Be Back In Ten
Simply Because This Kids Losses Are Already Half His Wins
Potential Skripz In His Sig, Judging Spelling You Mustve Made It
Lyrically Mutated, Damn Your So Wack Your Not Even Underrated
He's Broke Cuz He Sold Text, His Entire Verse Is A Whole Wreck
Periods In His Custom Title To Indicate This Bitch Wears Kotex
Jay Pana Already Beating You, My Verse Will Leave You Wonderin
Spiderman Movements? I Can Picture X Ecutions Dick Under Him
Your Terror, I'll Attend Your Funeral And Dropkick Your Paul Bearers
I'll Teach You The New Era, A High Class With Spelling Errors??


12 Is All You Deserve You Wack Bitch

I dont care about that... I just wanted a verse written. Thanks for showing up, it took you long enough... UPPIN #1

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High Class=Hot Punches Nice Flow And I Liked the Title Personal It Was Straight Nice Verse Son
Fue=His Setup Was Tite The Punches Were Hot and his Opener Was Funny As Fuck Also The Kotex Lmao U Came Better And Your Verse Was Funnier As Fuck

So Vote=Fue

Breakdown..

Punches-Fue
Personals-Fue
Meta's-Fue
Structure-Fue
Flow-Tie
Multi's-Fue
Wordplay-High
Overall-Fue

Someone poll vote on my battle against diverse

Opening - Fue wit the personal
Punches-Fue
Personals-Fue
Meta's-Fue
Flow-Tie
Multi's-Fue
Wordplay-High
Closing - Fue again wit the persoanl
Overall-Fue

can ya please hit up my battle below and drop an honest vote...

thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...712#post1048712

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well this was a landslide...


fue with better punches and nicer structure

the punches had more wit and they made sense
he also had decent wordplay which took it for him

peace

^ Im sick of your lame votes. Describe it, and you expect to be a Mod? Please, follow the damn rules first. I understand what you mean by the vote. And I myself know he won. But thats no excuse to not make a proper vote. So please make another post that has a better explination. It would be much appriciated...

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Honestly what is ure problem?? you just said you know he beat you but you are gonna bitch cuz i didnt break down each bar?

And dont say I lame vote because i break down battles real well when it is necessary...not all battles are decent enough to be broken down without hurting people's ego...fine here is ure breakdown


Fusion

Swaying Votes, You Hopped On X Ecutions Dick From The Start
How The Fuck You High Class When You Failed Your Report Card
/\decent personal punch
Wheres This Fag Been? I'll Take A Break And Be Back In Ten
Simply Because This Kids Losses Are Already Half His Wins
/\blah
Potential Skripz In His Sig, Judging Spelling You Mustve Made It
Lyrically Mutated, Damn Your So Wack Your Not Even Underrated
/\decent punch
He's Broke Cuz He Sold Text, His Entire Verse Is A Whole Wreck
Periods In His Custom Title To Indicate This Bitch Wears Kotex
/\lmao dope
Jay Pana Already Beating You, My Verse Will Leave You Wonderin
Spiderman Movements? I Can Picture X Ecutions Dick Under Him
/\witty punch
Your Terror, I'll Attend Your Funeral And Dropkick Your Paul Bearers
I'll Teach You The New Era, A High Class With Spelling Errors??
/\decent personal


High Class


Im the new age, the revolution, or call me skillz evolution
You might know battles, but to enter one is your ' Execution '
/\nope personal but worded booty
5-0 leaves me I-Rate, your dick-rides from noobs Vibrates
Your lacking in the game, while im elevating at a High-Rate
/\no punch wack multies
A new Gift, so get- rapped and sent off to me too get capped
You lost already, I had your life-line cut in Elevated-Bitch-Slapped
/\blah
Fuck by the feet, I take ya whole body, and continuo to re-peat
This win... My Key Treat... I dont see heat
Im the " Mountain " you cant climb, for potential im too " Steep "...
/\first line ok second played and wack
Now Time To Get Serious
/\why even post that?
My Mind is Diverse, while Se-Quales leave yours Feeble
Im known as lethal, " Your a Bitch "...
Dont get mad hommie, Im just speaking for the people...
/\decent punch but structure is stretched like a mug
So go Suicidle, Cause this Win and I are about to go Bridle
' Flywieght '... Im Higher in the Class, your way under my ' Title '?
/\playing of [i]your[/n] name...no
Pussy of America... Your libel... No questions this clown won that election
Professions stray far, But I never knew Bitches get so much effection...
/\blah


there you have it dont think it was hate...i dont hate you i can careless about you...you have something against me and i dont care because net beef is gay...i vote fair period

vote - fusion for better punches and consistency

highclass you had maybe two bars that were decent...

I didnt expect that much emerge... I just wanted a little somthing like you did in my other battle, thats all... I will peep your battle as soon as I can. Thank you for the full break down though...
UPPIN FOR HIS WINNING VOTE...
good battle hommie...

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Damn I Forgot About This Shit, Uppin For The Final Vote.............................................