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Dear Momma
not much changed, bought a chain, got outa da game
of drugs, no more dimes or dubs, love ya, uppin 4 hugz
i hope ya get dis soon, i got ya picture pinned up in my room
i sent my new number wit da letter, i pray it getz through
i cant see goin another day without talkin 2 you, and plus
im late wit da rent money an might have 2 move, but trust
that you'll see ur eldest son in time, tell my boyz i said hi
tell popz dat i forgive him an all da bad bloodz dried
im try'in 2 make it big so you wont have 2 work no more
maybe if i clean up my act wit dis rap shit ul answer da door
when i come around, im jus try'in 2 make u proud cause i adore
da time u workes 3 jobs, protect'in me 4rm da cops
the endless dayz de knocked, 2 cuff me 4 stores i robed
da dramma it never stoped, an 4 a momma it must be hard
tell'in ur eldest son u love him when hes locked behind bars
just wanted u 2 know dat i care 4 u
an threw thick or thin momma ill b der 4 u

4rm ur lovin son-Sims

(roughly based on a letter i sent my mother)
dis was keyed b-4 but got shut down so i pasted it on a new poll
wit betta links 4 Masta-C

Shit was cool it had the Tupac vibe in dat from Dear Mama but it was yo version

^^^werd...........it was an ok drop though.........vocab was ok...........u had some nice multis..........ok punchlines............overall this was an average drop......keep postin and elevatin homie.........

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..this topic could never get old..I could sense that you have been influneced by 'Pac'..but..who hasn't..now on your flow..your vocab was alright..your wordplay was average..lacking on multis..other than that..

thankx 4 da feedback
uppin 4 more
peace

yeah while readin it i was like 2 pac all the way and i go down to the posts and everyone else said it to so im not the only one i mean no words or ryhymes were copied so its tight