critical say keep em comin so thats what ima do/
spit this sadistic shit that'll lay out ya crew/
its been known ta uncover tha pussy in ya crew
and ive been known ta bring out the bitch in you/
step at me see if ima juss let that shit slide/
naw ima slice ya throat and make it look like suicide/
do or die thats what u should be askin yaself/
cuz my dawgs make moves real slick wit no slealth/
its juss tha means we got ta survive in dis life/
so ya think its really worth losin ya life/
"puck it" like "kirby" i mean fucc it you aint worthy/
ta take up anymo' of my time while you on my mind,
Im trynna grind and spit some sadistic shit like brains
blown outta they mind/
for tha others who want it juss come holla at me/
til then ima kick up back wit ma crew like its maui/


lil verse i did on anotha site...holla back wit opinions plz.........


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101649

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...519#post1035519

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...525#post1035525

it was good keep at it make it longer hit up my down to ride

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yo that was pretty good.keep it up.

this was pretty weak..........vocab was basic.........rhyme scheme was pretty wack.......multies were basic........wordplay was basic.......overall this was a pretty weak drop........keep postin and elevatin homie.......

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kinda basic....and i wasnt feelin da begining when u rhymed da same shit twice......but its ok...whats doesnt kill u makes u stronger .....so jus keep elevatin
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