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if i step up to flo/
u know the matters the same/
and if i pull out the deuce deuce/
its gonna scater ya brain/
plus i spit ryhmes so hard/
it will get ya boys to hate ya /
ur ryhmes....PLEASE!/
i used bettter shit for TOILET PAPER/
plus i know ur STYLE/
cause u stay VERSE writtin'/
but the only thing tight...is the shit u bytin/
imma call u lil TYSON/
ur style is lazy eyed/
my style will makes ur devil worshipin ass PRAISE TO GOD/
people call me lypo/
cause of the way i move weight/
but april 7th is the ony time this cat moves CAKE/ (peep his profile b-day)

im out.....1

HA! kid you wack, your not even worth a pink slip battle, heres a quike 10min verse for you...

Enjoy


Please open ya text book and refer to refrained violence
You're so pathetic that critique's prefer to remain silent
I could rip this kid's ribs apart with my practice spit
And flip this hit spit by heart tearing this bastard's wit
Ya last heard sh1t's outdated kid ya better switch styles
It's no wonder I found ya name in Sacred Society's bitch files
Like a "one hit wonder" ya mad because ya know ya pitch less
This verse's a sure hit it's just a matter of which fist
Outcome of this battle's something ya wouldn't wannna see

Finisher:

I see through your countless efforts begging for attention from RB
Contracted the ever spreading virus called "I'm the greatest newbie
Vainless acts of self praise through conscious humilty disgust me
Must be thick skinned to have the audacity to step on these grounds
Last time I checked "Mr.8th world", I highly doubt rap was a Clown
It's sad for a fresh face to stride into a grave where ashes lay
Your futures in shreads and sickeningly likened to that of Casius Clay
Point is this, do not jump to conclusions that you might be great
You'll forever remain a speck of dust if text is to decide your fate

Wackest shit ever...
Needs elevation on every subject
Flow, Punches, Multies, Personals, Structure, Wordplay...ECT..
Man... This was horrible....
Overall....-10000/20




ALOT BETTER
Structure was perfect
Flow was awsome
Punches were decent
Wordplay was great
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Overall.......18/20


Vote-Verstyle
Its obvious why
He straight killed the newbie
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Vers took this in every single category besides wacknes... 8th got him on that.

Serious that was some hopless shit.

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Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe

Eki you might of forgotten to poll vote... anyways thanks to those who have voted....upping #1 for honest votes.

Thank You
Peace

man i dont really give a fuck....i didnt wanna use anything on u...ur the one bitchin on how u wanna battle....liek i said u really wanna heat....them go to audio 2morrow

Wow 8th Posted Like that against me too.... what da fuck that's not even a verse... that's a liek a no-show verse.....

Verstyle won... better punches better personals better everything... he had better lines.... and his lines were longer so the punch would go through... im not going to break it down any more
V- Verstyle......
favorite line
I see through your countless efforts begging for attention from RB
Contracted the ever spreading virus called "I'm the greatest newbie

return the favor please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103439

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~Those To Fuckin Weak~
Vs 8th Wonder KO
Vs -Demon- KO
Still Iller Than u
Battles

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149276
^^some thing to get fix...
cas i messed up on the set up... alright.. admins.. delete that loss please.. thanks

Here to Ko yo sorry ass

8th

if i step up to flo/
u know the matters the same/
and if i pull out the deuce deuce/
its gonna scater ya brain/
plus i spit ryhmes so hard/
it will get ya boys to hate ya /
ur ryhmes....PLEASE!/
i used bettter shit for TOILET PAPER/
plus i know ur STYLE/
cause u stay VERSE writtin'/
but the only thing tight...is the shit u bytin/
imma call u lil TYSON/
ur style is lazy eyed/
my style will makes ur devil worshipin ass PRAISE TO GOD/
people call me lypo/
cause of the way i move weight/
but april 7th is the ony time this cat moves CAKE/ (peep his profile b-day)

the whole thing wasnt very good
work on ya struct, 2 of your lines should be 1
work on ya punches also



Verstyle
Please open ya text book and refer to refrained violence
You're so pathetic that critique's prefer to remain silent
I could rip this kid's ribs apart with my practice spit
And flip this hit spit by heart tearing this bastard's wit
Ya last heard sh1t's outdated kid ya better switch styles
It's no wonder I found ya name in Sacred Society's bitch files
Like a "one hit wonder" ya mad because ya know ya pitch less
This verse's a sure hit it's just a matter of which fist
Outcome of this battle's something ya wouldn't wannna see

Finisher:

I see through your countless efforts begging for attention from RB
Contracted the ever spreading virus called "I'm the greatest newbie
Vainless acts of self praise through conscious humilty disgust me
Must be thick skinned to have the audacity to step on these grounds
Last time I checked "Mr.8th world", I highly doubt rap was a Clown
It's sad for a fresh face to stride into a grave where ashes lay
Your futures in shreads and sickeningly likened to that of Casius Clay
Point is this, do not jump to conclusions that you might be great
You'll forever remain a speck of dust if text is to decide your fate

structure was good, flowing almost perfect
had some good punches
wordplay was great

overall - Verstyle won this

keep battlin and elevate 8th

oPENER:verstyle
closer:verstyle
punches:verstyle
wordplay:verstyle

I wasn't going to respond until I read the first couple of lines, and I said I have to hit it up

Wonder you were not wack you just neede a lil more time maybe to work everything out. Add a word here and there and take some stuff out and you would have been fine but overall verstyle took this.

My vot since I can vote now goes to:Verstyle

Return the favor
Gazeebo vs. oCANti
and
Wr!te Mind vs. oCANti

appriciate those who have voted....................upping for more honest votes to get this battle overwith...................................

vote versytle for having a remotly battle verse

better punches


blah the whole nine

this is embarrasing