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01-10-04, 03:56 AM
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DAYUM....written PLEASSSEEE Feedback
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Nevermind....im gonna lengthen it, then ill redrop it....
Last edited by Avenge : 01-10-04 at 03:27 PM. |
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01-10-04, 09:14 AM
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IP:
i liked it alot. a bit short but the lyrics, structure and flow was all dope.
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01-10-04, 09:52 AM
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IP:
I liked it make it longer and it's banging man yo structure and flow was on key just make it al little it longer............................................ .................................................. ..............
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01-10-04, 11:10 AM
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IP:
This one was hot man, everything was on top, I liked the flow and your use of vocab. You're definatly spittin this on on the real. Keep writtin, definatly lookin to see more like this.
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01-10-04, 11:51 AM
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IP:
I'll Conceal Drips...Cuz Like OverUsed Wells My Tear Ducts Ran Dry
A Man's Cry Falls On Deaf Ears...So Whats Tha Point Of Having Tears On Stand By? I Can't Die...... Show Me Hate Or Love...I Embrace You Fake Thugs With 8 Slugs section was dope...didnt really need wordplay or punches...illness... Multi's were ill .. flow was on point throughout..only lost flow in 1 place...niceness.. some thug lines mixed with deeper 1's interesting.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105566 |
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01-10-04, 02:54 PM
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IP:
Thanx uppin.........
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01-10-04, 03:03 PM
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IP:
Please can i get some feedback... I wanna know if im ill enough for a vet crew......
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01-10-04, 03:21 PM
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IP:
this shit is bitten..you know it!
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