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Moterboatin Sonuvabitch
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Life: Through My Eyes
IP:
More might be added later.. dunno yet..
Once I was a legend, and now I'm only forgotten Used to get biten, but now I guess my prose is rotten I'm living in the moment, but came a second late Cuz Life's a whore, who won't kiss on the first date Just hope to hold hands with Life, or if you think so Ride around her house, and throw bricks at her windows Life's a series of moments, blink and you'll miss it So I must be blind, or maybe my eyelashes are twisted It's like I've missed it all, blinked for 18 years right ? All I've seen is missin images, like sadistic strobe lights Life's a riddle, too bad we'll never get to solve it It's our acid to base, but no water as a solvent Will never work out, no answer will be found The equation is: You - life = 6ft under ground
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IP:
As unfortunately short as this piece was, I did get an opportunity to see the topical prose that I am sure you hone. The intermittent metaphors that supply the ultimate metaphor (life) were a nice addition to the piece's quality. I'm sure you could do better, & hope to see an influx of Open Mic activity in the near future. I liked this line best:
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Moterboatin Sonuvabitch
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IP:
I'm down my friend. And this was just a little something I wrote in English one day. It was ment to be longer but I could honestly go on forever comparing life to things so I just decided to post it.
PM me or something and we can get a WP collab going.
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