* Your love has got me tangled and trapped
* Playing those games you play.
* You had me to the point of death
* Thought you'd be glad if i'd fade away.
* You said words that ensured
* Forever there you would always be
* Time has shown me just one thing
* It's what a bullshit pact you made to me.
* You told your friends what a pimp you were
* And how we'd done the deed.
* Why cant your friends see that your full of shit
* B/c that never happened with me.
* I can't believe i got so trapped
* I couldn't run away.
* No matter how many times you hurt me
* I'd always let you stay.
* I can't believe i got so trapped
* Allowing myself to be played.
* The only way to fix this shit
* Is to allow myself to fade away.

** This is my first one so please dont be to crude... lol **

It has a kind of simple truth to it. Really makes it seem 'real', if you know what i mean. The feel of one reminiscing, going through the motions as one looks back at his memories.

It's good as it is. But also something that can be built upon.

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Thanks for the reply. It was my first one so i didnt really no where to start, but i totally understand what your saying. Thanks again.