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Danksta 0 0%
Brethren 5 100.00%
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Old 01-14-04, 08:50 PM   #1
Brethren
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Brethren vs. Danksta

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5 vote win
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Due tomorrow, midnight
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Old 01-14-04, 09:15 PM   #2
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Check check swoosh!.....My verse will be up...............maybe tonite...................................
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Old 01-14-04, 09:27 PM   #3
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Im in the mood to key...So here ya go

Opener-I'll do it once,So i wont have to Stomp-this-bitch-again,I'll drop-this-kid-with-pens,Fuck bein a flyweight...Allow me to introduce ya'll to REN-FROM-MICHIGAN

Unleashin the terror-i aint on no ‘gay shit’ when i 'BUST-ON-YOU'/
cause i stay with 'SOMETHIN-AT-MY-SIDE', like the 'TWINS' from 'STUCK-ON-YOU'//

brain-and-framework, equipped-with-an-ego/
like a 'LIFETIME-PHILIDELPHIA-FAN', i 'STAY-WITH-A-EAGLE'//

like i said im-egotistical, the original-lyrical-cannibal, a hipocriteral-liberal, and hysterical when asked if Brethran is intellectual/


like messin-around with a ‘DOCTORS-CUSTOMERS’, this kid is ‘FUCKIN-WITH-MY-PATIENCE’/
you-a-ugly-bitch-too, Ren could fuck ‘ALEXANDER-HAMILTON’, and still couldnt ‘DATE-10s’// (yeah.. if you didnt know Hamilton is the guy on the 10 dollar bill)

Aiight.....Tried a little different style....Lets see if it works
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Old 01-14-04, 10:44 PM   #4
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Damn, shit just came up, I got to finish another battle, so I can't drop until I finish one of them, sorry. I'll drop as soon as one of them closes.
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Old 01-15-04, 12:19 PM   #5
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Its cool yo................................................ .................................................. .......................................
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Old 01-17-04, 12:39 AM   #6
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Uh.....No show? or wtf....................................
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Old 01-17-04, 11:30 AM   #7
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No, I'ma drop today, some stupid shit came up. .
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Old 01-17-04, 08:40 PM   #8
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I kill rap bitches, Danksta 'leaning towards heaven', so I'm 'Hell-bent'-when-I'm-chokin-her,
Ha, with verses so wak, no wonder you had to tell-them-what-was-your-opener,
In the middle of your punch, your arm just takes a direction-change,
Hit yourself in the face, like I was Jet Li, in my Lethal Weapon-stage,
Rap isn't a game for midgets that don't tell the truth, that's what this 'imp-lied',
A battle with me, like retarded kids opening Christmas presents, dude gets ripped-wide,
Claiming you hard...is that blood or tomato sauce?, like scared troops-in-Italy,
Your verse is like 'diving in the shallow end', I'm a giant shark, while you screaming super-fish-ally (LOL),
Quit trying to rhyme, put the 'mouse' away, run away back to your 'crawl-spot',
Little kid hasn't hit puberty, so he's 'sent-home', like baseball players when 'balls-drop'.


Line #5) Imp is like a short person, lie means not telling the truth, also makes implied.
Line #10) In puberty, your balls drop, in baseball, if you drop the ball, the players get to walk.
If you don't get the rest of the wordplay don't vote, there's probably a wordplay in every line.
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Old 01-17-04, 10:18 PM   #9
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...........I Don't Know Who got this but both verses looked pretty tight.... Nice Shit.....
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Old 01-18-04, 12:11 PM   #10
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uppin # 1 .
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Old 01-19-04, 12:35 AM   #11
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uppin #2 .
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Old 01-19-04, 04:30 PM   #12
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I'm sick of this shit, I vote in 20 battles, and don't get any votes, you fucking selfish bitches.

O yea, uppin #3
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Old 01-19-04, 04:39 PM   #13
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vote you fucking cocklickers uppin #4 .
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Old 01-19-04, 05:57 PM   #14
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flow- brethren
punchlines- brethren
impact of disses- brethren
overall vote- brethren

this battle was one sided brethren came with better multies and punchlines.. peace
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Old 01-19-04, 07:49 PM   #15
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thanks, last upp #5 .
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