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01-21-04, 01:46 PM
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just a quick 5 minute flex {key}(short)
IP:
I'll try to take advantage of ur smilies lol
Watch yor back, I bust with glocks blazing  I bust thru like Triads, *click* I CockAsian Some punks front me, So I got rapmatic.. I said "See ya face?  " they thought i was a faggitYou see, when ya dad drove by he flew.. Cuz when I roll with my crew... We  bout youI piss yall off, yet you still wanna linger Cuz I flip your concepts like middle fingers  Theres 2 occasions when I spit: Its at... Ripping emcees, and listening to you rap  will return favors |
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01-21-04, 02:23 PM
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IP:
nice spit good flow hit up my political rap song...
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01-21-04, 04:43 PM
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New to RB
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IP:
big up
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01-21-04, 04:59 PM
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IP:
good flow crap topic go to the w.e.c and elevate
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01-21-04, 05:36 PM
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IP:
whack....... whats with colouring it up... thats a bit harsh, improve ya flow, carry the rhyming further... and even out the syllable count,... then start expanding the scheme....
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01-21-04, 07:31 PM
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IP:
Straight dope..your going places..lemme tell ya..heh
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01-21-04, 10:08 PM
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IP:
LMAO... this was one funny piece, if too short.... you had some very good punchlines and similies in here... lyrically not that strong, but nice poetic elements..... lol.... nice job... made me laugh 8/10
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