I use to run on a different site... diff. crew... had diff. beef... coming here and start`n ova... check my style lemme know what you think...

Wanna test the Paradise, ya best think twice/
Get ya mind right, or ya life'll be the price/
Wit a swift knife swipe, or a microphone devise/
We rock ice, throw dice, and drop nyce on a mic/
Heed thee advice or end up behind my precise sights/
I'll make ya see the light, or INS-da-Don might/
Slice ya wind pipe, while Blood digs out ya wife/
We ain't afraid of a knife fight in broad day-light/
Would never recite what another man write, but MOBB might/
Even Killa Seven been known to bite like a dust-mite/
At least Deadly been forthright, A~S~K is all white/
Like the backseat-boys, only guns theses killers got be toys/
It's G-O-P, -AND all you COWards just can't stop these BOYS/
We like the bullies in the court yard taken ya lunch money/
Shit`n on all you Free.Style`n flunkies, turned text junkies/
We smack`n that ass red like spider monkees/

Paradise = old crew
Blood, INS = crew mates

No One Can Read The Print In Your Post Thats Probably Why You Havent Got Any Feedback

looks straight now rite?!

..this was elementry..LOL~~~keep up...

still light shit, but you can come by an drop a tryout for dynasty and see wat happens

Good flow...

Blah as hell content, though.

Gangs, net-crews, whatever.

Seriously, what the fuck ever.

But you got talent, just need to direct that at real, meaningful and fuckin interesting topics.

No one here gives even half a shit bout ya old crew and peeps we don't know.

Utilize wordplay, ya got ya metas down...

But wordplay needs to be incorporated.

Peace

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good looks on the honest breakdowns... keep sum of that shit in mind.

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