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01-26-04, 07:53 PM
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Flyweight
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First Rap Post In RB Feedback 1-10
IP:
Check it,
Lyrically Wanted Like KroOkz And ~thugs~ You Sp1TTin *Dope* Shit Like crackheads on ~drugs~ Step To The mic Dawg You Aint Got ~balls~ Leave Ya Body Rottin In THe Niagra ~FALLS~ Yo Shit Stink So Bad Like Milk N ~beans~ By Any ~MEANS~ rappin rapidly like ~machines~ coast to coast like west coast ~marines~ got ya in stitches like denim blue ~jeans~ Got Ya Lookin Green Like Fresh Sea ~weed~ Yo Girl Da Soil And Im Bout TO Stick IN My ~SEED~ (yall get it?) You A Joke Like MTV'S Boilin ~points~ I'm Hittin Yo Brain And All Ya ~joints~ Like Poision Venom Crashin Yo ~brain~ Like A Hackin Device Smashin yo ~mainframe~ Just Aa Short Rap YO ! Murda INC!! |
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01-26-04, 08:23 PM
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it was alright but when you said murder inc it ruined it for me, i'm not a big 50 fan but i like shady/aftermath but overall a nice quick rhyme keep it commin'
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01-26-04, 08:26 PM
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IP:
good 4 your first post.
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01-26-04, 09:08 PM
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Flyweight
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Aight Guyz Thnx
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01-26-04, 10:09 PM
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Word.
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1 Open Mic Per Day...Follow The Rules.
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