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02-03-04, 02:24 AM
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One of ma first songs eva (Lone Solja)
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LONE SOLJA http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/freshemceemusic.htm its lone solja, i got others there too. i've made quite a bit. juz some helpful feed back wud be nice. hope ya'll get da meaning behind it. da quality isnt gr8 but i bought a new mic recently and i mite re record. -1-
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02-03-04, 03:20 AM
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* Listening *...beat is kool...i def like this beat...its got that vibe to it..like it makes u wanna do something...hmm...flow is ehh..not really on point...that's a major issue...lryics are aight...creative...well not really..but u know what i mean...your right..quality isn't that great...the beat is louder than ur voice...with the new mic u got..that should help..just work with the volume...but the 1 thing u did...was stay consistent...and that's a big factor...overall...i give this track a 6/10...props..keep doin ya thang...stay up dude...
if u can...check out my new song..47 Popstars.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111395 feedback is much appreciated homie... Thanx.... and One Luv Man... ~KJ~
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02-03-04, 03:27 AM
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thanks homie, im checking ur song out now uppin
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
Tupac Shakur, Me Against Tha World ____________
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02-03-04, 06:43 AM
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Light Weight
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Beat is pretty much cheesy, sounds like someone just found the 808 drum machine.
Flow, choppy, delivery the same. Voice, ehhh.....lyrics... not really feelin this here man, sorry http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111810 .OnE HuNeD'.
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 .Soul-Full Beats. Originally Posted by sdizzle any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best |
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02-04-04, 02:05 AM
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yeh aiight uppin still............................................. ..................................
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
Tupac Shakur, Me Against Tha World ____________
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