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My rhymes are the best/ I blow this shit to ur chest/yall bitches are rookies/I'll blast u wit my ozzie
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Hey, um a lot needs to be worked on, but u know not bad, not bad... Keep it up newb..
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Wow...this was ...Hmmm~~~Just die!!!!!1
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Why... Do you have shit in your eyes or something? You need to go work on everything... Structure... Flow... Creativity... Vocabulary... Imagery... EVERYTHING... Wack... pz |
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Huh help this dude go pray Im out holla at yah boy
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Since no one will tell you what to do to improve i'll help you out a bit....Work on everything....dont structure it in paragraph form like that...put it line on top of line so its structured good and try keeping the lines around the same syllabals so it helps the flow out....also try adding some multies...and if you need more help go to the forum that says Wackness Emergency Center..There is tutorials in there and stuff like that...keep at it.
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yo, whats up with you ryme skeem, you aint got it.
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"The Eleete"
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Daayam playa alguien ayudenlo.....nah jk......elevate homeboy........youll only get better with time........keep at it an dont let anyone bring you down.........
peace.........check out my latest post dawg..... I Bought Her Flowers Today http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111616 Last edited by ELEETE : 02-04-04 at 02:21 PM. |
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