Resembles Life what once was held of Light,
Too ample in itself for human sight ?

An absolute Self--an element ungrounded--
All, that we see, all colours of all shade

By encroach of darkness made ?--

Is very life by consciousness unbounded ?
And all the thoughts, pains, joys of mortal breath,
A war-embrace of wrestling Life and Death ?

By Unknown Skillz

thats a gud peice also!! i think summa ur best wurk is brought thru wen u write in short. keep droppin

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Resembles Life what once was held of Light,
Too ample in itself for human sight ?

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felt this piece and all good imagery
its hard to pick a favourite quote,
but it was all good
holla at me

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Thai Reppin
DYNASTY SOLDIER
Azn Blooded

this is pretty good
i had to read it twice to fully understand
and grasp the message
it made me think
nice and short, no complaints

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."

Very good poem, mostly because it was deep while being short. The poem would have undeniably have ended with mention of war, which is good. It is a great Idea to mention war of life and death in this poem because it is so very true. The vocab is ok, not much to say about it. The structure, unique, bleak, great. the length, short, but perfect. the message deep, heartfelt, philosophical. overall, great poem (sorry for the short response but i dont have much time and it is a short poem.)

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