OvDose ft NTense - "Jealousy" is the newest song

Check it out and tell me what u think / give suggestions

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/ovdosemusic.htm

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damn after the last track i heard..i didnt think it could get any wacker in the next 5 minutes..but i was wrong..the beat..your lyrics..this is complete trash..sorry dog..no offense..the only thing i can think is that this is some kinda joke..cuz its only worth a laugh..

pZ..

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i'm definately gunna have to agree with dude on this one, what exactly was that??? there wasnt even much of a beat, did u make that yourself? i dont mean to be real critical or anything, but STOP! DO IT OVER!! lyrics could have been alot better too, but if u still wanna keep this theme, try a rewrite, get another beat...just, start from scratch man

yea boy ima agree with the others, the beats wack, lyrics wack and u can sirtenly elevate everything, kept working though

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dun be mad cuz u lost, your just another victim



Lyod banks
"lyod banks motha fucka, with a gun and a clip/
ready to smack up all those nigga's that running there lip"

im peepin Jealousy right now......

the lyrics were OK in the begining, then it goes down hill, the beat aint 2much of a beat, the quality is kinda doo doo...this track could be alot better if took time (not sayn u dont, juss take more) dont take this as im hatin, im juss tryna give u feedback. It sounds like u aint takin rap 2 serious.

CIN

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