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02-16-04, 02:25 PM
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Forbidden Love
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I rushed this poem i know, but a good friend o mine wanted me to write it for her, so here goes. mainly expressing myself on this, not trying to make it real good.
Forbidden Love
…I love you so much, I can’t control my emotion… …Bragging about my look, my sweetness, and my straight west coastin… …This is real love, this feeling that is occurring… …Every time I don’t hear you, I can’t help but worrying… …My love is forbidden by my ancestors and fellow peers… …My love is banned from life; it causes so many fears… …My love causes so much pain, sheds so many useless tears… …I can’t forget love now, not after all these years… …I live with and without love, day by day and night by night… …I don’t want to hurt you girl, don’t want to cause you any fright… …My heart is cold, but burns with love when your beautiful face is in sight… …You’ve been a great friend to me; hopefully I can be the same towards you… …But no matter what happens between us, know that I’ll always love you…[/ Dedicated to Alex Luv ya hun. |
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02-17-04, 10:31 AM
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IP:
uppin #1 someone please peep this, my work always gets slept.
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02-17-04, 04:54 PM
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IP:
This peice was okay...It really didnt thrill my interest but it gave me a feeling that you really want this person and every thing about them...Even though you rushed it was still a nice poem
*Harley*
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