Rap And Hiphop Isent All Punch Lines\ Its A Culture A Religion A Person Wit A Strong Mind\ Its A Revolution For The Streets\ A Release\ A Way 4 Cats Wit Beef To Make Peace\ A Way For People To Be Reached\ Wit Hiphop You Aint Gotta Smoke Weed To Let Mind Get Deep\rap Is The Struggle Aka The Husltle\ A Chance For People To Stong Arm Enemys And Show A Little Muscle\ A Chance For Have Nots To Get What They Dont Have And Let There Pockest Bubble\its What The Goverment Took From Us And Tried To Bury In The Rubble.

it was a nice lil flow for your first post but try expandin tha vocab. the topic was real tho keep rippin dude

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"Streets like a bullet in cancer, it'll swallow you up
or eat you from the inside and hollow you up."- Beanie Sigel

"Stare gun in face
heart flutters dawg it's startin to race
stuck in my place
nowhere to turn, nowhere to go
death right around the corner soon as the gauge exsplode"- Me

that was hott 7/10
expand the vocab
and work on ur structure
keep postin