yo im feelin kinda caught between heaven and hells kinda hot,
suspended in time comin up with rhymes losin my mind in this madness.
do i apply what i know or just forget what im taught so distruaght,
searchin for the awnsers in a world of sadness.
so confuzed what did i lose i spend my life feeling used and abused,
i woke up in a dream wanting to scream cant come to grips with what is real,
i have to deal with the paths i chose,
and express the issues i feel.

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Pain is abscence of tolerance
its the emptyness that conqueres the mind body and soul

yo, that was pretty personal.
but you need to work on have equal syllables on each line.
work on that and it will look more like a poem.

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stay true, cuzez

yah it was a hard read for a poem

but i love the topic


one love........

yeah the structure was messed up with the rhyming you used. Was kind of hard for me to read to, thoug it was pretty good.

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