10-15 lines
No dick riding
No crew votes
No hate votes
3 straight or first to 5
Due by 9:00pm Tuesday night
Don't care who spits first, but I won't have time to go till tommorow, so to speed it up, you can if you want.

So this rap battle is against a chump named vinchee
i must be dreaming, somebody please pinch me
this battle be over in the blink of an eye
ill give u so much pain, u'll want to die
and beg for me to kill u and rid u of the pain
but im like a serial killer, mentally insane.
I wont stop, till ur on the floor bleeding,
with your chest wide open, and rats feeding-
on ur intestine, the outcome predestine
the pain unbearable, nothing comparable
to this little ass whipping addressed to you
mr. da vinci better think of what u should do
your dumb ass should of stayed out of rapping
if u had kept on painting u woulda dodged a slapping.
so ur times up, here's a friendly goodbye
wait a second, didnt u just fucking die?

Sorry I'll post by tommorow, I've busy with school lately.

Dear Diary,

Today I had to battle this boy named Da Vinci//
I'm really quite confused, I thought I’d win, but he's beat'n me easily//
His mettas, were better, and I've never seen a vocab with such complexity//
He moved around my punches, oh so effortlessly//
Its almost as if he had a map to my entire strategy//

Maybe Tim tipped him off, Tim is just pissed off, he needs me to swallow but I can’t help but spit//
Da Vinci even painted my name (L.E.B) Lyrically Everybody’s Bitch //
Now everyone's callin me this! Tim tells me “it won't stick,” and “just shut up and stay up on this dick”//
All-and-all today was shit, even my mom told me that I was an accident//

She said she didn’t plan on having me as a baby//
But two transvestites rapped her back in the eighties//
And I know this all may sound crazy//
I went to a psychic she told me to kill myself cause I have no future//
After this battle today I'ma take her advice and listen to her//
Dear Diary, I regret to inform you this will be my last entry//
I just don't see the point not more, after battle'n Da Vinci//

Sincerly, Yours

L.E.B

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Alright there it is, now we just votes. Sorry for taken so long man, I'm just in mid-terms this week.

What the hell??? why did it spread mine on to two posts?? Anyways, nice drop L.E.B

very nice style on ur rap, lets hope ppl actually vote.........

Come on yall, we need some votes on this one, either way!!

Alright yall, I just voted on about 10 or 11 battles, so can we get some votes here.

yo yall are right about the lack of voting aroun this bitch
niggaz iz sleepin on this one too
on da real i have low expectations for most of these battles, but this one was hot
yall both came correct, with the vocab, rhyme scheme, and word play

but i side with da vinci for killin him with the diary entry, fresh and creative
L.E.B. was hangin in there but i wasnt satisfied with his ending

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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271

We need some votes on this one yall, either way.

Alright..

I think Da Vinci Took This One Because of His Style With His Flow...I Like That...Something New....

You Pimp Come Check Out I.L.L. in Crew Forums...Just Try Out...

To L.E.B.....You Did A Good Job Just His Stlye Was Crazy Man..

Vote: Da Vinci

~R~

Alright cool, we still need more votes. Come on yall,

Hey we need some votes on this one, come on yall

Alright, I just voted on a bunch, I'm gona bring this to the front of the front lines one more time and maybe these people will check it out.