i was in gym class and some punk called-at-me//
didnt get my attention so he threw a ball-at-me//
i turned around and saw-him-gigglin//
called-him-dipshit//
told him the difference from his girl friend and my dog-is-lipstick//
i said his fathers fat and also called his mother-dumb//
so he picked up a fuckin ball and threw another-one//
i ducked,told him he sucked,and he picked up a fuckin-rock//
"Nah im just kiddin man,damn cant we fuckin-talk"//
"i didnt mean you mothers-dumb,man i love-yer-mom"//
"you threw two balls at me please dont throw another-one"//
reached out for a hand shake and i smiled-evily//
shook his hand as he dropped the rock mild-N-peacfully//
i punched his face wit no warning,i shoulda-said-block//
put-him-in-a-head-lock and said "you should-held-tha-rock"//
i let him get a head start before i kicked-that-clown//
let him stand up before getting sticked-back-down//
then i saw the principle//
i acted invisible//
"He woulda hit me wit a rock if didnt hit-him-tho"//
she took me to the office//
"alright mr.Hot-shit,you must have fucking lost-it"//
i didnt fucking loose it,this shit is fucking-non-sence//
this is bull fuckin shit man im full-of-this-school//
dropped to the floor when i saw a cop pull-up-to-the-school//
there was only one cop when i crawled-to-the-door//
then i saw him radio some guys and call-for-some-more//
sneaked-to-the-parking-lot//
seen-a-parking-cop,parking his cop car in a empty parking-slot//
waited till he left then i seen he didnt lock-the-door//
thoguht-some-more before i wired and pedeld to the floor//
drop the car off in a alley when i should gave-it-back//
going to jail for years for driving like a maniac//
wondering how much time-it-takes//
before i get finely get caught...or am i finely-safe?//

ha ha ha!!! that shit was funny. the only advice i could give you is to expand your vocab. good shit though. p.m. me with more of your work. peep my verses in open mic, then tell me what you think. i look forward to hearing from you cutty. one.

......supervillain of the crhyme sindicate

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R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

that is sum heavy shit mate.you realy got some talent there.maybe you could teach me sum of ur shit cus it realy flips my mind.

thanx man...imma keep posting

kidna funny in a very cynical way a couple of nice punches thrown in there to i liked that girlfreind, dog line. solid flow threw the whole peice the volcab could of been a little deeper but it's a 'freestyle' so i don't think it hurts nice piece

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Thanx

tell me....hot or not