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03-29-04, 06:46 PM
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That's Right...I'm White
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Pure Emotion
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Emotion Triggered by Just Simple Thoughts
Hard to overcome when lost in Distraught Motionless movement keepin it tamed Lookin into past thinkin i'm ashamed What have i done, what am i becoming My mind is lost, can't overwhelm the numming Hazardous times, Wondering why i'm living why can't i stop fighting, and start forgiving Got nowhere to run, and no one to turn too All of my Emotions, are just to hard to Construe tried to hide it, but that was just to hard to pursue So i had to let it out, took it out even on my friends too now i feel alone, lost without having any sense of respect wantin to apologize to them, but i know nothin will correct all the things that i've done, causing all this pointless commotion and look at me now, sitting here releasing all this pure Emotion |
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04-07-04, 06:52 PM
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That's Right...I'm White
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don't be sleepin
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04-07-04, 06:55 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
yo that was a really good poem... yea keep that shit comming it was good... nice flow and every thing...
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04-08-04, 02:57 AM
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That's Right...I'm White
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thanks for the feed
uppin for more |
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04-09-04, 10:24 AM
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IP:
Nice, it had a smooth flow to it!
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04-09-04, 03:49 PM
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That's Right...I'm White
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IP:
what's up with this site and one line reply's. Wonder why people don't post alot.
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05-07-04, 03:40 PM
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IP:
it was a good pome and ity kind a made me fael like me when i was i a lil kid
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05-08-04, 03:59 PM
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IP:
This Was Nice....liked The Emotion ...nyce Thoughts Put Together Straight All Together
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