10 lines min
no hate or d/r votes
First to 5 winz

Spit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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you cant chop a girl, because you fear sluts//
cuz your nothin off the top, like homer simpsons haircut//
in this game im da best freestyler, so i think ill spit first//
i think ive heard a better flow, from listenin to Nelly in reverse//
i came weak in this battle, for some obvious reasons//
commit suicide, jump off the top of the four seasons//
trip you up, slap you up, all on purpose//
undergound mc, ha, aint even scratchin the surface//
your nothing, have nothing to do//
how does it feel to lose to someone, more retarded than you//
when it all compares up, your just a rookie//
moms so nasty, haniball wouldn't eat her pussy//



iight that was weak but o well im in a hurry

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Haha Aight lets show this cat

411 just for your info, Learn to use verbs Dash your lines and learn your fuckin Sylibals, How you write this inflects, reflex's and curves to how you type and this is what it resembes.......

First off i aint gonna stress or sweat this but you ain't no makin sence/
I seen retards with lines less dence..Im fencin you in/
Lyricaly Gifted, Like a Six'th Sence, "Hence" Lyricaly chanlanging consider it sudden death/
AMENSE!! The masses i lead with a beat and a pen, Talk about my mother kid thats the ultimate Sin, /
What's it matter to me,?/ When i made your girl bleed for a dime in the den, What a good little sex pet...(haha)
(Yo Furious Change up the Beat)
Ima Ample and you, Just like the RB That will do tons of shit to you!!
Acts Of God That Will Criple you/
Get it fool?/
Now i dont got a pool of punchlines, But i do got somthin special for you considering the time.....
This Guy thinks he's the ultimate rapping cause/
Little to know sins gotem wraped in gause/
Suckin The Votes in like i got a basket of straws/
After this battle you can gimme a round of applaus/
Playin mix tapes in chainsaws, For this Dum sucker, Wanna call names lets go Mother fucker.... Ball Taint lickin Analbastin Pig Fucker, Dirty sally Slap ass jiggin Half ass rymin dick sucker, Cock-Lunch Ball busstin asshole Blowin Faggot Cunt rapin bastard... Ohh wait, This guys a lyrical disaster i seen terette victems ryme better plasterd... Man This is sick.... Silly MC ryming isen't for kids................

Haha Yeah..... Oh yeah and a shout out to all yall and my Glorious Return

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Please Vote.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Opener - Sin
Closer - Sin
Punches- Sin
Word play- Tie
Flow- Mc
Sturcture- Mc

nice shit i think
Sinnester won tho

Vote// The Sinnester

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Vote=Sinnister

Mc came weak as hell.He could have came harder than that.Sinnister came better with punches,but that structure needs work 4 realz.Sinnester got my vote 4 better punches.

Hit one of my battles back,after all,I did take time 2 read this shit!!!

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Sinnister got hipacritical, he talked about notorious but fucked up on the first line, ha ah. oh well

Structure, S...was kinda weak, work on it.
Flow, S... cuz mc sucked.
punches, none
personals, none
metas, S, not really but w/e
opener, S
closer, both were wak.

V/Sinnister.

could U guyz vote honestly in one of my battles in my sig. If u dont have 120 posts, then dont worry about my battle wit OneManBand. any honest votes and feed back would be greatly appreciated.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

thesinnister: ya had a nice flow, ya punches were good and hit hard, structure could use some work, but overall a good verse....
mcnotorious:ya verse was decent, but u needed to come a bit harder here, try working in some personals, but ya structure and flow was good.....
VOTE:THESINNISTER for overall punches

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oh yeah drop a vote/link here:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135415

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