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04-24-04, 09:55 PM
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The Topical Juggernaut
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Plots
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As I Sit and Stare, Unaware of Plots around 'here' and out 'there'
My mind pauses, clicks and points - but ta' where? Suddenly I’m Scared as Suddenly as with Blare (witch) And Suddenly I can't even Maintain my Life, I don't Care Tragedy befalls, Mass Nations and All Sanity Corrupted Explodes off Dry-Wall Mentality Grated like Cheese - stuck like Blue-balls Immediately with Ease I switch Gears and Peep's Freeze Struggle at their Belt loops for Heat ta' make Plea's Time elapses, collapses and traps us Enough Time for me ta' take Mine and let Caps bust As you can see: the plots Shifted like this Rap Stuff No longer Intellectual Conceptual or even Stacked up Its Slacked up any one can get backup You want Bad Luck? Incoming Mack Truck. Savage as Pitchforks thrown with Full Force Enough Torque ta' Rip ya Spine out the Back Porch Un-taught, the Mic can be Deadly and What-Not I'm here ta' help you un-do Bad Habits like Slip Knots Hip-Hop Elevated comes across Uneducated Heavy Weight MC's suddenly Light Weighted and Degraded Like How The Fuck They Ever Made it? Unknown like Plots until they're Full Blown By then it's impossible ta' see the light of True Stars Shown Heavily hidden like Heavenly women that Listen - See? Time to throw down the pencil and just... Leave. Peace.
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04-24-04, 09:58 PM
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IP:
yo shit was tite and nice with the multis, vocab, and wordplay. i enjoyed reading it dawg. stay up son
REPLY TO MINE: BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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04-25-04, 12:13 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP:
basiclly everything that kid said i think ur one of the best writers on this siteout of all the stuff ive read on this site i beleive u have cams hader than all
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04-25-04, 02:13 AM
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IP:
Thanks for the feedback. Appreciated.
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04-25-04, 10:28 PM
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The Topical Juggernaut
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IP:
Uppin~
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04-26-04, 08:36 AM
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IP:
ive seen ure ish on the old rb if its the same person, and this was another nice drop,
flow, multies, creativitie were all good with nice structure.... overall a nice read...props....
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04-27-04, 07:25 PM
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The Topical Juggernaut
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IP:
Thanks Krys..I peeped some of ya' stuff...Keep dropin cat.
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