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04-28-04, 09:48 AM
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strictly the truth no twist n turns
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im turnin into a legend while niggas still tryna be the greatest
although im unsigned majority niggas hate this while im in the studio niggas tryna break this i already know it it a fact imma be the #1 once i get it aint no turnin back i aint doin this shit for fun i took after tupac slangin rocks tryna get some pay but cause i spit fly rhymes i deal wit the same shit everyday other mcs stay on my back instead of handlin their own im only 16 but fuck my age shit im grown fuck the princess of hip hop im the mother fuckin queen i stay on top n im blowin up the scene now look back at my crew shit im exploiting my team look at the blood in my eyes im a hip hop fein i rap for 1 reason thats to blow off steam this shit is just delicious it taste like ppeaches n creme i stay posted up on the wall doin the gangsta lean it feels rel good to rock the ice that gleam im down for my crew its in my gene i can punch u in ya dome n make ya feel it in ya spleen everytime i pick up a mic niggas swear im a gimmick but tell me why they start runnin everytime that i spit it n everytime i drop a album they the first ones to get it __________________________________________________ a lil somethin to make my spot in this forum its not my best but its still tight _________________________holla wit some feedback___________________
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest  
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04-28-04, 10:05 AM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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nice shyt breezy feelin it gurl nice wordplay in that keep em comin holla bak ~1~
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04-28-04, 10:05 AM
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IP:
can i get some feedback
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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04-28-04, 10:06 AM
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IP:
thanks cuz
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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04-28-04, 12:09 PM
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IP:
feed back plz u do me a favor n ill return yours
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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04-28-04, 12:20 PM
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IP:
yo this shit was aight there was some simple rhymes there but for a chick this shit was tite. Up the vocab and rhymes, and the flow was aight.
holla back at mine I AM THE AMERICAN DREAM BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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04-29-04, 12:46 AM
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IP:
holla @ ya girl wit some feedback
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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04-29-04, 12:58 AM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP:
Good drop the rhymes were kinda basic but you had great worplay and good flow so only thing I'd say is up the vocab other than that your shit was hot, it'd be a really good track for a femcee, keep dropping!
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04-29-04, 10:16 AM
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darkmanner
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yeah i'm feelin your flow. Hot shit...keep it comin
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04-29-04, 11:20 PM
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IP:
good lookin darkman ill return the fav
in the mean time i need more feedback
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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