Letz do dis!!!

12 bars okay...
no dr
no crew
no hatin
normal sh*t
let's go

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come on den man i thought u were the shit
but oviously u da type dat gets done in on hit
on punch and one kick, they call me y. poizen,
they also call me slick, dont get me started on ur puny dick
cos when i'm on fire i keep burning, when they hear ur beat they gonna start turnin
in their grave, i must admit ur brave to step up to me,
can't u see ur playin with dangerous shit, this is vemon i spit,
through the microphone, u better shut up before i give ur mother a bone,
up the arse, this is the next clarse can u keep up?
cos if u dont i'll grind up up and feed u to my dog,
but seen as ur pure shit, ill flush u down the bog,
i better leave u alone before u start cryin, we all know dat i'm da one dat will be flyin
so u better stop tryin before u start, why dont u get off this website and find urself a tart,
i would love to go on foreva but i'll spread u on bread like butter and end this shit without a single stutter!!!

nice spit once the other guy drops I will hit this battle up, until tehn can you hit up my battle wit insane?.. thx

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119323

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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two...
The

TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

My rhymes twist limbs like the exorcist kid...
newbie innocence won't help ya after you're dead and livid//
I find the name killa played out... and wasteful like filler,
even if the yo rhymes slid backward, they couldn't be a 'thriller'//
fill me on yo skillz... you're like a John Doe fo real,
I'll still cut yo arse up...discard ya like orange peel//

I know you...
just masturbated...
keyboard sticky...
but RB on favourites,
years now ya missed sunshine...you always online//
but besides a quick wrist ya need skillz, wit and shit,
advertise yo rhymes on google and still won't get a hit//
noobs wanna dive in the rap game, get drowned, leave no ripple,
gettin swallowed up ya sink lower than yo momma's third nipple//
while I cause tremors, coerce thunder...mcs and buildings go assunder,
I grant your sins forgiven... while you're praying fo my blunder//
its a wonder if you'll bother to answer my shots that kill and smother,
you might just go to another battle, being a real 'Progressive' customer//
(the insurance company)
I bust on ya, trust mih, this will be costin ya big,
hit ya up like Tupac, tho no homies...nothing//
caught back in two minds...whether to beat you or to merc you,
don't look so sad son...will hurt me more than it will hurt you//
so I end findin this punk guilty in da fake mc trial,
I sentence u to bitchin and askin yourself "Why"?

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Think killa took this coz his rhymes are bare jokes and deadly

Killa Poizen you my dawg BUT StriniBonafied took this one. SBs rhymes flowed tighter and he kinda talked more sense

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I wna battle ya coz i didnt get a chance 2day doin work

thanx yeah strini u were truly fresh i admit u totally won dat one

killa - not the best opener, it had potential though. Flow was ok, but fell off on a few occasions. Rhymin' wasn't that great, a couple of bits didn't even rhyme.
"cos when i'm on fire i keep burning, when they hear ur beat they gonna start turnin
in their grave, i must admit ur brave to step up to me, "
i thought that line was pretty weak. i did like you're finisher -
"i would love to go on foreva but i'll spread u on bread like butter and end this shit without a single stutter!!!"

STriniBonafide - you're punches hit harder, you're flows flowed, rhymin' could be better, but overall good spit. favourite line -
"noobs wanna dive in the rap game, get drowned, leave no ripple,
gettin swallowed up ya sink lower than yo momma's third nipple//"

vote - STriniBonafide

yo' killa, try an' get some harder punches an' a smooth flow next time an' you'll be jammin' peace...

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Hydroponic Buzz cheerz for the view, i'm a freshy innit, i'm new to the game so i'm workin on it. thanx though

yo killa poizen where are ya ive set up da battle ive already posted my lyrics its your go

Killapoison ima give this to you. your shit was off to but u made a lil bit more sense than ST.

ST i read like 5 lines off you shit and i didnt even keep readin. i didnt make sense. elevate on all aspects and then try again

Vote= killapoizen

VOTE ON THIS BATTLE HERES THE LINK
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121024

Strini killed that shit. Both of u need to work on the flow i think. Killa u had punches but none were as good as Strini's. Overall i liked that verse better, flow, everything. Next time both of u try to use a few multis and some more personal punches cuz a lot of that was pretty generic. It just looked like the same old shit.
My vote goes to Strini cuz that shit went hard.

Look out for other niggas hit my battles up links in sig

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Killa poizen won easily.But don't get happy piozen,you had easy competion.If it was again experienced rappers,you both get killed.But striniboafide,that was horrible man.You guys have to realize that raps have to have complexy to it.You guys had rhymes that were too simple.

vote-Killa