2nd open mic......


A second ago we was in a tight spot
cuz u overheard me tellin a girl she was hot
girl don't let that ruin our relationship
cuz she ain't got you ass, your eyes or your hips
so think right before you go crazy
because a second ago u was as pretty as a daisy
so listen to the facts
cuz our love we can never act
I thought u was down for me, down for us
now all you wanna do is cuss and cuss
i can't believe your attitude
we was sexxin & u ruined the mood
i sorry i don't wanna be cruel
but since u ruined the mood i ran out of fuel
cuz right now i'm sherm
and u sucked up all the sperm
i know, i know i'm gettin too personal
but look at all the times u pushed & pulled
all over and on the dick
it was like u was driving a car and i was the stick
back and forth up and down
hurry up, hurry up saw a frown
girl thought u wanted to get low
thought u wanted to be treated like a hoe..........

ya thoughts on it?????

That Shit Was Hot I Lik Ehow You Playboy'd It Up....holla Front .....1

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hey yo im known to play it low//
dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio//


ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes//
my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1

yo thanks fo tha feedback

So Unique now i see ya up shits creek tried to start some beef and ran scared upon me showin my teeth ,mind playin tricks of casket thoughts with your family creepin over screamin no no god, dont take em away, one tounge lash. distaster strikes where it may. over cash or ass alas wake up you dont wanna play .......yo i need help i have no idea how to battle in here!

yo ^^^^ u battle in the front lines homie...

yo the verse was tite i thought it was gonna be a pussy bitch song but i was wrong. the rhymes were a bit basic, the flow was aight, and up the vocab.

yo holla back at mine
THE SICKEST OF SICK

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ya i needa lot of practice since i'm juss beginning

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If u havin gurl trouble i feel bad for u son/I got 99 problems but a bitch aint one

That was hott for a beginner man.. keep that shit up.. u just needa throw in some more wordplays

naw i got a girl, i was juss writing a song bout my ex
but there's nuthin between us anymore cuz we cool wit
each other we still friends i guess we started as friends
& we gonna end as friends....

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not bad at all man.. pretty hot

yo thanks fo all the feedback appreciate it a lot
juss needa know how im doin

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good flow man for real .......keep hagglin this shit yo check out my shit.. dickridaz..on open mic aight peace

so out of 10 wat do ya'll think

??/10

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aight thanks for all the feedback really appreciate it anymore for this
thing made like 2 weeks ago a day or 2 b4 I started really battling

rating: ??/10

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