10-15 lines
no crew votes
no hate votes
u spit first
u spit good u might .... u might earn my respect
good luck

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AIGHT LETS GO//


DISCHARGE known for 'exposing-lungs' when 'folding-bums' unless you do like people having a seizure and 'HOLD-YOUR-TONGUE'//
i'm the 'bomb' you'll get your style 'blown-to-crumbs' and call aurora AGENT SMITH cuz you couldnt handle 'THE CHOZEN1'//
answer my challenge? i see that you've 'gotten-bold' but all this text has got your career going nowhere like immigrant's 'WITOUT-THE-BOATS'//
your a slick rick 'witout-the-gold ' So i'll have you RUNNING FROM THE NET WITH YOUR HANDS UP like 'SOCCER-GOALS'//
if you seen this kid win it's obvious the 'shit-was-luck' so DISCHARGE'll have you like kid's without NICKLELODEON...'MISSING-GUTS//
close your 'slut' mouth everything your 'spitting-sucks' naming yourself after a porn star guess you knew you were 'GETTING-FUCKED'//
your lines are 'far-fetched' better 'hold-your-distance' and 'bite' while you can cuz these punches will have your 'MOLARS-MISSING'//
you seeing me? naw you better 'control-your-visions' and the only time i'm feeling AU is if i'm measuring in the 'SOLAR-SYSTEM'//
a bad rep that's all this 'lame-is-holding, plus we all know your skills have been at a stand-still like a 'DAME-THAT'S-POSING'//
you should retire holmes the game-is-closed-in' plus your wack so the only WEBSTAR s.o.e will ever recieve is a 'CABLE-MODEM'//

NIGGA U WAS LAUGHIN (BY MAIL) NIGGA WHY U LAUGHIN WHEN YO CLOTHES STICK TO YO SHIVERZ// I DONT COME WITH IT// I COME BUST CAPS MAKE U LOOK LIKE A DEAD FISH IN A BLOOD BATH//

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

Every Line Has //

So Dont Get Confuse Nigga Aight

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

i cant believe that im batteling this same bitch toxic verbs//
this cats gonna get smoked like them cali herbs//
you have no "toxic words",your ryhmes are just plain "absurd"//
your weak,so ive heard,i took-a-look at ya record now im sure//
you have a diseas called"wackness" and theres no cure//
your not toxic just a little 11 year old computer nerd//
your balls havnt droped yet come back when uve matured//
your "fucking wack" when i give you advice just listen, use it//
your a fucking white trash hillbilly,switch to country music//
ur girls with me dont throw a fit,give it up!,ull never even see clit//
"uve been hit!" i won and your rhymes are even pre-writ//
ur rhymes r shit, kno one wants to hear this"toxic retard" spit//
you kno something? you bite rhymes bitch thats called theft//
take your wackass crew and leave ,then we wont have any fake mc's left//
take a break take a rest! your rhymes are flatter than your girls chest//

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Holy shit man... this battle was realy close... lemme break it down further

Toxic:
wordplay=6/10
punches=6/10
flow=7/10
creativity=6/10
total=25

Discharge:
wordplay=6/10
punches=7/10
flow=6/10
creativity=7/10
total=26


Close shit.. much props to both.. im just feelin discharge more cuz them punches.. maybe it would of changed if he had went first.. but its all good

Yo I Know What Dis About Now// Its A Fuckin Crew Battle// Nigga U Neva Told Me Dat// If U Did// I Would Bring Somethng Hot!// Nigga U Neva Told Me//

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

it dotn gotta be acrew battle man
what ever i dotn care ur crew leadre is leavin anyway cuz he got merked so there is no crew

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Iight Here It Is
Flow=toxic
Punches=discharge
Wordplay=tie
Vocab=discharge
Killa Rhymes=discharge
Vote =discharge

i'm a break it down simple

flow - discharge
structure - discharge
punches - tie
opener - toxic
closer - discharge

OVERALL - discharge

i was feelin his verse a little more and i thought he came a little harder with his punches

yo return da favour playas on my battles
the links are in the sig.

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nice drop both fellaz

discharge u had some tite lyrics and some punches and easy strucutre

bestline- cant believe that im batteling this same bitch toxic verbs//
this cats gonna get smoked like them cali herbs//

^^ nice start-

worsteline-none

good job overall verse gets a 9/10

toxic

nice drop ok verses and alright structure rhyming needz work sum shit u said neva rhymed

bestline-DISCHARGE known for 'exposing-lungs' when 'folding-bums' unless you do like people having a seizure and 'HOLD-YOUR-TONGUE'//
i'm the 'bomb' you'll get your style 'blown-to-crumbs' and call aurora AGENT SMITH cuz you couldnt handle 'THE CHOZEN1'//

^^ nice start

worsteline-answer my challenge? i see that you've 'gotten-bold' but all this text has got your career going nowhere like immigrant's 'WITOUT-THE-BOATS'//
your a slick rick 'witout-the-gold ' So i'll have you RUNNING FROM THE NET WITH YOUR HANDS UP like 'SOCCER-GOALS'//

boooo

overall yo vere gets a 8/10

winner-discharge

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Flow/ Discharge
Rhymes/ Discharge
Punches/ Discharge
vocab/ Toxic verbz
Personal/ tie

Best line:"uve been hit!" i won and your rhymes are even pre-writ//
ur rhymes r shit, kno one wants to hear this"toxic retard" spit//
you kno something? you bite rhymes bitch thats called theft//
take your wackass crew and leave ,then we wont have any fake mc's left//
take a break take a rest! your rhymes are flatter than your girls chest//

Toxic Verbz your structures messed up, you probably would have won if it was better

My vote : Discharge