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Old 05-05-04, 10:02 PM   #1
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Tens

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yo the other day i ran into a couple of tens,
at the mall and they were hangin with a couple of friends.
they both stuffed thier chest, their breast B's at best,
and they were lookin for their next best guest to impress.
so i thought to myself, might as well be me.
so i turned around and rolled up my sleeves.
but as i approached, i was like JEEZ!
they started makin out like D.I.K.E.'s
but just right before i was ready to leave,
the blonde looked up and started yellin at me.
"hey you wanna join in? i saw you lookin at me."
na, i was goin to the pop machine.
i need a fuckin sprite its like a hundred degrees,
but if you'de like i'll take you back to my C.R.I.B.
and i'll take you both on like a Crispy Cream,
and eat yo ass out til you start to scream!

Let me know if you were feelin that
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Old 05-06-04, 08:50 AM   #2
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it was aight it actually sounds like a commercial verse, u lackin vocab though, how old r u "and eat yo ass out til you start to scream" i like i like lol
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Old 05-06-04, 03:37 PM   #3
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thats all gd, keep goin
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Old 05-06-04, 05:28 PM   #4
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hey, thanks for the feedback.
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Old 05-06-04, 06:23 PM   #5
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No, I wasn't feeling that
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