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Old 05-09-04, 04:07 PM   #1
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hot shit

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// yo while you'll nigga's at home jacking yo dick// i'm on tha block slipping a bitch// and stacking my bricking// 16BARS you know i'm tha shit// a nigga battled me with some weak ass shit// so if any nigga want it// bring it an get it// i'm talking to any bitch nigga who reading my shit//




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Old 05-09-04, 04:10 PM   #2
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Pretty good man, you got good flow, just need to extend your Active Vocab a bit, and if you want to battle, Im up for it!!
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Old 05-09-04, 06:09 PM   #3
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that shit was ass homie...
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i aint no 'sweet studd', im a 'street thug'/
that's quick ta beat a nigga like a 'cheap rug', until he 'leave blood'/ - Big L

I'm goin' 'all out', i tear the 'wall out', i'll knock you 'all out'/
you couldn't grip somethin' heavy unless you pulled my 'balls out'/ - Lucky

people tell me im 'mad-nice', but i take it in strife/
cuz while you had a bad day, I had a 'bad-life'/ - Lucky
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Old 05-09-04, 06:14 PM   #4
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i didn't like it..u need multies...wordplay...creativity...*UNO*

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Old 05-09-04, 06:16 PM   #5
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Spoken, can you give me Feedback on Mine please???
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Old 05-09-04, 06:18 PM   #6
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123259 someone check it out, give FeedBack!!
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Old 05-09-04, 08:08 PM   #7
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dawg...can't u think of more rhymes??????
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